In a brown box
decoupaged
with memories
both inside and out
I took what was left
of my heart
placed it carefully
into the near dark
It seemed to float
as if already in infinity
I closed my eyes
and the lid simultaneously
Feeling tears swelling up
as a flood against my cheeks
I muttered to myself
like I often do
Absently asking
and answering
my incessant questions.
Would this lovers gulag
be secure enough
to last indefinitely
To hold my heart
deep into the future
I don’t know
and can’t possibly
be sure
but I remember
opportunity
is always hiding
in the shadows
Waiting for
the right moment
to jump out at me
I can sense pain, yearning, uncertainty and at a certain point, resignation, in these emotion-packed piece. You have profoundly moved me with your poignant words. Enjoyed.
Oh the anguish of pondering the usefullness of trying love once again. I think you are right about questioning. But I see love in your future in this poem also. I really related to this poem. Great write. Liz
B r a v a !! B R A V A !!! What a great way to start the new year.
T h a n k. y o u, S a r a. . .both for this and for taking the time and trouble to read and review my poem, "Just This." To receive
praise from you is praise indeed! May 2008 be your best year yet, and may it be followed by many, many more. 'Pea' <3
I love your spirit Sara! No matter what came before you end with hope and that is a fine image to leave in the readers mind!
a good start to a new year which I hope is filled with all your hearts desires!
Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 1, 2008
Yesm and when opportunity jumps out at you, you must be willing to embrace ot . . . There is ALWAYS hope . . . I am a prime example . . .
Although there are bittersweet and sad sentiments expressed within your verses, you have left the door of hope ajar. Thank you, Sara. Best wishes to you for the new year with love and peace,
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T h a n k. y o u, S a r a. . .both for this and for taking the time and trouble to read and review my poem, "Just This." To receive
praise from you is praise indeed! May 2008 be your best year yet, and may it be followed by many, many more. 'Pea' <3
a good start to a new year which I hope is filled with all your hearts desires!
Love,
Eileen
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