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Superfluous Dynamics
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Superfluous is a fancy word

for describing the feeling

that silence conveys...obviously

without ever uttering a sound. 

And that feeling is:

"Your presence is unwanted.

No good-byes are necessary."


 

© 2008 Sara Coslett

 



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 Reviews of "Superfluous Dynamics"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 23, 2008
super flew us ;)

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
You hit the nail on the head here, Sara, one of life's unpleasant but very real truths.
John

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on August 9, 2008
That would make a great definition for malevolent too... Ach! but that creature has an angry eye. magmatic personality? --Charlie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 9, 2008
Powerfully succinct and to the point; well done, Sara. Love, peace, and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on August 9, 2008
Ouch. Not a nice word at all. Excellent write. Liz

Reviewed on August 9, 2008
Striking definition... "Superfluous Dynamics" takes one's mind to a trip to the prairies of scorn... The closing line in combination with the picture... They look and sound like an invitaion for a diving into the LAVA!... An impressionistic composition I read.

I salute You, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on August 9, 2008
well done


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