Spirit of the dearth (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by ANTHONY KARIUKI (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2004

This is pure truth. shame on to death.

Reviewed on April 20, 2004

Yes, death does seem to be a greedy beast that feeds on life!
Well conceived concept!

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on April 14, 2004

This is so unbearably sad, Bhuwan...
Your words are truly heart moving, and powerful.
You speak for those that can not...
Brauwan, you have the most beautiful, caring soul!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by J. Pajot

Reviewed on April 14, 2004

Moving and passionate words...and the disturbing visual reference of the photo adds to the sting of those words...for the suffering of others should always sting until we can put an end to such unneccessary mistreatment of our fellow travelers in this being. May you find brighter days and softer times,

Jim

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on April 13, 2004

Bhuwan, masterful write!

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on April 12, 2004

Bhuwan you never let us forget that other realities exist though some of us may be fatted calves. For this I am ever thankful for you and your writes as I feel the pangs between the screams. Peace ,blessings and continued voice my friend. Love,hope,luck and God's blessings. Mikii

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 12, 2004

This hurts Bhuwan...it hurts so bad...
makes me want to do something to help..
The one thing I love so much about you
my friend...is that you write of this
and keep us informed of the ills of the world..
and you do not attack others...You are so special..
God is smiling down on you.....floria

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on April 11, 2004

Write, Bhuwan, write, lest we forget, lest we neglect, lest we turn away from those less fortunate. Thank you, dear poet!

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on April 11, 2004

A nice dose of reality. Great job.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on April 11, 2004

I think poetry is at its most powerful when it forces us to confront some reality or need which we might otherwise ignore. You have done that well here. Dawn

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 11, 2004

Sad truths expressed in these verses, Bhuwan. Thank you for this offering, my friend. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 11, 2004

This is a great leveler, it really moved me, we've become blinded and anethertised to it all, but 2/3 of the world are suffering, whilst we complain its over cooked steak, this should be ion posters in the first world, it is one world, perchance of where you're born!! Well stated..

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 11, 2004

Very touching Bhuwan!!

Happy Easter To You!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on April 11, 2004

succint. gripping. powerful piece.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 11, 2004

the world can be a very distant place when our brothers and sisters are neglected ...

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)

Reviewed on April 11, 2004

This is the pain of our "humanity"
How can we change this?

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on April 11, 2004

This is painfully succinct and so well expressed. I wish you and yours many blessings, Bhuwan.

A thousand hugs,
Tami

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 11, 2004

Thank you for sharing Bhuwan, we muct never
forget the truths that are in this world
and try to help all we can!Excellent write!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 11, 2004

Bhuwan,
This is so sad.
painful and it is here
among us.

Happy Blessed Easter
Poet....

Love N Luck

lady peg

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 11, 2004

Hi Bhuwan:

Some children were born without light, and they never had and probably will remain so...

They are the walking dead -
Dead to the world
Dead to themselves.

This is sad.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o( ~