On the green terrain of the fortitude,
I have built a house out of the broken bricks,
and the pebbles, they had thrown at me.
And have painted my rooms bright, with the redness
of the volcanic wound, they had bequeathed me.
And I’ve planted the thorns they had pierced
me with, in the garden, hoping to see them
blossom into the flowers of the serenity.
O God! I thank them for giving me everything.
What they’d hurled at me were you, yourself to me.
“The beauty of that moment,” I shall never, never forget!
They were throwing broken bricks at me, and I was
building a house with it. I was weaving my dreams with it.
Now, the course of my life is as sweet as the breeze.
Inside the house there is a new world waiting for me.
Had they known then that, I would be using
those bricks and the pebbles to build my
house, then they would not have gifted me
those ingredients. Poor them, what was rubbish
to them, turned out to be too valuable for me.
They were blinded by disgust; they saw nothing.
Ah! But I saw you in those bricks, and piled them up,
until I build a house………until I build a house.
Proud, very proud I am now, I shall be telling
my kids and my grand kids, with a silken smile
on my face, some where in time that,
I had built a house out of the broken bricks,
they had hurled at me…they had hurled at me.
And had painted my rooms bright, with the redness
of the volcanic wound, they had bequeathed me.
Reviews of "O God! I thank them for giving me everything."
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2005
O GOD is an incredibly beautiful poem, flowing with graceful sagacity. One can learn profound wisdom and gain great wealth reading O GOD!I THANK THEM FOR GIVING ME EVERYTHING.
Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2005
Very well said my friend in Nepal. The stone they throw at us and the thorns that prick us all make us better than we were before and God helps us wiht those very things ot make us what we are supposed to be.
Nice to be reading you again my snow mountain friend.
Beautifully expressed tribute to creative endurance, Bhuwan.
You've captured the struggle with remarkable perfection.
Absolutely loved it!
Peace and happiness be with you,
Carolyn
Bhuwan, if people could only absorb this teaching and understand in their hearts the lesson of truth it brings, then we'd have a peaceful revolution in this world. At first reading I was too tired to respond and after a second it is even more beautiful...
Oh, Bhuwan, what a wonderful piece. How great to be able to take the broken bricks of pain and frustration and build something warm and wonderful as a home of them. Your home, imagined or real, is a garden of delights and will last forever in the hearts of those who have read this wonderous poem. Best to you and yours forever.
Bhuwan this breathtaking symbolism is so powerful , the message
so magnificent it has me in tears of joy!Your wisdom is outstanding!
Blessings to you ...Love, Eileen
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Nice to be reading you again my snow mountain friend.
Love from the extreme south of India - Joel -
You've captured the struggle with remarkable perfection.
Absolutely loved it!
Peace and happiness be with you,
Carolyn
Love Tinka
What a wonderful poem of strength this is! I really like the idea of this poem. You and your children are in my prayers all the time.
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Love to you and the children,
Sandie May Angel :o)
Thank You
Tracey
so magnificent it has me in tears of joy!Your wisdom is outstanding!
Blessings to you ...Love, Eileen