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O God! I thank them for giving me everything.
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On the green terrain of the fortitude,
I have built a house out of the broken bricks,
and the pebbles, they had thrown at me.
And have painted my rooms bright, with the redness
of the volcanic wound, they had bequeathed me.
And I’ve planted the thorns they had pierced
me with, in the garden, hoping to see them
blossom into the flowers of the serenity.
O God! I thank them for giving me everything.
What they’d hurled at me were you, yourself to me.
“The beauty of that moment,” I shall never, never forget!
They were throwing broken bricks at me, and I was
building a house with it. I was weaving my dreams with it.
Now, the course of my life is as sweet as the breeze.
Inside the house there is a new world waiting for me.
Had they known then that, I would be using
those bricks and the pebbles to build my
house, then they would not have gifted me
those ingredients. Poor them, what was rubbish
to them, turned out to be too valuable for me.
They were blinded by disgust; they saw nothing.
Ah! But I saw you in those bricks, and piled them up,
until I build a house………until I build a house.
Proud, very proud I am now, I shall be telling
my kids and my grand kids, with a silken smile
on my face, some where in time that,
I had built a house out of the broken bricks,
they had hurled at me…they had hurled at me.
And had painted my rooms bright, with the redness
of the volcanic wound, they had bequeathed me.


Copyright 2005 Bhuwan Thapaliya.

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 Reviews of "O God! I thank them for giving me everything."
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2005
O GOD is an incredibly beautiful poem, flowing with graceful sagacity. One can learn profound wisdom and gain great wealth reading O GOD!I THANK THEM FOR GIVING ME EVERYTHING.

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2005
Very well said my friend in Nepal. The stone they throw at us and the thorns that prick us all make us better than we were before and God helps us wiht those very things ot make us what we are supposed to be.

Nice to be reading you again my snow mountain friend.

Love from the extreme south of India - Joel -

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on February 20, 2005
Beautifully expressed tribute to creative endurance, Bhuwan.
You've captured the struggle with remarkable perfection.
Absolutely loved it!
Peace and happiness be with you,
Carolyn

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on February 19, 2005
Bhuwan, if people could only absorb this teaching and understand in their hearts the lesson of truth it brings, then we'd have a peaceful revolution in this world. At first reading I was too tired to respond and after a second it is even more beautiful...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
Symbolically and meaningfully captivating, Bhuwan. Thank you, my friend. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
Bhuwan, this is extraordinairy...i enjoyed every word and the message should not be missed

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
Par excellence Bhuwan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
Oh, Bhuwan, what a wonderful piece. How great to be able to take the broken bricks of pain and frustration and build something warm and wonderful as a home of them. Your home, imagined or real, is a garden of delights and will last forever in the hearts of those who have read this wonderous poem. Best to you and yours forever.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
excellent, heart warming write...

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
This is simply wonderful and what you did with the bricks is amazing as more should do this. I did a walk for cancer survivors and memorials too.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 18, 2005
An extremely profound poem and message, Bhuwan. Hope all is well.

Reviewed on February 18, 2005
Hi Bhuwan:

What a wonderful poem of strength this is! I really like the idea of this poem. You and your children are in my prayers all the time.

I have sent you a separate e-mail. Please check your e-mail.

Love to you and the children,

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2005
Bhuwan, This is Magnificent! Truly so magnificent and so Inspirational. What an insight to give to all.
Thank You
Tracey

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 17, 2005
an outstanding parable ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 17, 2005
Bhuwan this breathtaking symbolism is so powerful , the message
so magnificent it has me in tears of joy!Your wisdom is outstanding!
Blessings to you ...Love, Eileen

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2005
Soul touching write!


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