As I watch me
fleeting away from myself,
all my energy- all my liberty,
moving inexorably into,
a day, a week, a month,
a year, perhaps even a decade;
I wonder- what is time,
where it is going, and
how much further will it go?
I wonder – again and again,
why is it that they think,
any time is just like-every other time?
Ah! But deep down inside,
by myself I dream,
alone I came and go
like the waves of the moment
into the Sea of time.
You've expressed the wonder within all of us, Bhuwan. The "sea of time" enfolds us all as we ride on its wave, in and out with the tide. The question is what are we doing in this moment of time to help our brothers? That picture says more than a thousand words or more could do. Shame of horrors!! Why in this modern age do people still starve to death? Why is wealth in the hands of the few who get fatter off the misery of the poor? Fine write...Lin
I too wonder my friend as aging it speeds up and I have yet so much to do as I thrash about in this sea of time. Excellent write my friend. Peace, love, and blessings. Mikii
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2005
When we break past the illusion of time we touch upon just interesting thoughts and questions. Wonderful write.
there is such an expansive feel to this and yet you place us in the mind and heart of one man (or woman or child) and find that soul point to which all of humanity can relate. alone I came and go... excellent, Bhuwan! Dawn
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Blessings,
Judith
Regis
Monette
When Justice passes "By myself I dream" to call JUSTICE FOR ALL.
I heard the VOICE of this poem, "By myself I dream".
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love Tinka
Just sublime of a very moving and high standard. So delighted to come back to your poetry.
Tarek
Alone you go
Naked you come
Unnaked you go
The sea of time awaits everybody.
Wonderful piece, my friend
Reindeer
A timeless piece.
Eileen