When the life is broken apart (poem) by Bhuwan Thapaliya on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

deep wisdom... excellent finale...

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

What strong wisdom and depth you have shown and provided as inspiration for all in this piece! SUPERB WRITE!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Ronald Dondiego

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

A poem of great depth and insight, loved it! ~Ron~

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

Powerful lines. Excellent!

Reviewed by J Coffey (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

Carpe Diem, my friend! Excellent, powerful, and heartfelt write! And I think I shall go and live for a while longer! My race is not yet run!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

You poetry is touched by your wisdom Bhuwan
which melds so well with the beauty of your words...

Reviewed by Valerie Roeske

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

beautiful piece of artwork, excellent and powerful, thanks for sharing this read

Reviewed by anne cunningham

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

"don't you rupture your heart," ... easier said than done. uplifting piece.

Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

wonderful poem for an individual in need of inspiration - though "When the life is broken apart
Don’t you visualize the past
For past is nothing but history
And along with time it flies" - on this part, I thought about "history...flies" - but history also "lies" ... I feel that political (rather than personal) history MUST be examined unemotionally, analyzed, remembered...otherwise, many other lives may be broken apart.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

WOW! Bhuwan!!!

Here we are half a world away and talking about love and speading the word. You have that end of the earth and I'll take this end and maybe we can get a little done with our respected hearts brimming over with love. Spreading the word to our peers here works, then they do the same and the echo eventually is worldwide.

That's how it works!

Love you and your huge heart.

Peace and thank you.
Susan

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

What a powerful message of such hope great excellent poem again you know so well how to inspire and how to make us feel so vividly waht you beautiful poems want to say that is so amazing!!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

There is so much strength in this poem Bhuwan..I simply love it..Floria