Extensive sunshine is only burly darkness for her
The Sun of her life sank down, never to shower
Again with the charismatic glow for her delight
Still their cavernous love for each other resides
As haughty as the twinkles of the stars in reign
But the twinge still remains fresh as ever, in the
Core of her broken heart, where ache prevails
And envelopes her raped heart with smolder
Of darkness, yet, she lives with utmost impair
In this gloomy world of uncertain trust, where
The lure of lone flesh even refreshes the dead
For this is the world of distort and she soon will
Be dancing like the marionettes in this dark stage
To the tunes of mans lust, played by their thirst
Though she is heartbroken with his demise, yet
They’ll trap her like a parrot in the forlorn cage
And rape her lone soul, emotionally and physically
Again and again in this cold field of infernal earth,
Where the humanity is as unreliable as an illusion
Forever taunting to exterminate the life’s mission
She is abandoned as the solitary Sun in the Sky
And her destiny is as dark as the eye of the night
For each footstep towards cheerfulness brings her
Immeasurable footsteps of shadowy gloominess
Poor she! Have not a solitary soul to lean on shore
For hot larva of loneliness is boiling in her core
Still life has never-ending venom for her in the store,
Which can outburst anytime her very stimulation
Of hope to keep her alive in this life’s competition
For she is a widow and she sleeps in adversity
With psychological agony as her eternal pillow
You have a talent for creating a dream-like quality to that which is real.Some truly beautiful passages. 'She soon will be dancing like the marionettes in this dark stage to the tunes of man's lust.'You write with such passion.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2003
"For hot larva of loneliness is boiling in her core
Still life has never-ending venom for her in the store,"
Bhuwan this is splendid writing...deep and complex..great imagery...and difficult to do..I adore it..Floria
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2003
Incredible write in both imagery and emotion.
Reviewed by Ashley Tabor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2003
Beautiful write, with wonderful emotions and imagary. Well done!
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Love
tinka
Still life has never-ending venom for her in the store,"
Bhuwan this is splendid writing...deep and complex..great imagery...and difficult to do..I adore it..Floria
Jill