I am the lonesome love, aloft in the forlorn heart
Amongst the flashy lust, and shrunken idyllic trust
I dreamed that I was made in the garden of Heaven
To prevail harmony in this charismatic beds of Earth
But in my minds authenticity, I know now who I am
Yet I shine incessantly like the Sun and shed warmth
To all within the midst of their freezing compassion
In the swirling atmosphere of fathomless heart burns
I never complain of my loneliness to any single heart
But deep down inside, I know how much lonely I am
I have ghastly insomnia and I am interminably awake
Sometimes my own warmth burns my soul’s memoir
Yet I don’t remonstrate for I am estranged from all
I am forlorn and have no one to heal my hearts burn
I reside in the great height but I have the lowest joy
But still I smolder my heart and dispense love to all
If you think I am happy, then try being me for once
Then I vow, you will never want to be me anymore
For I am the lonesome love, aloft in the forlorn heart
Amongst the flashy lust, and shrunken idyllic trust
Copyright 2002 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviews of "I Am The Lonesome Love"
Reviewed by C.S. Snow (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2003
Just finished reading this over at Richard's Poetry In Emotion.
Just wanted to thank you for this and all of your most dynamic poetry.
-C.S.
Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2003
Too too gorgeous!
I want this one for the Winter 2004 issue of SONNETTO POESIA.
Quatrains are just fine in a SONNET journal!
So send it to me ASAP, OK?
Thanks,
Richard Vallance
Reviewed by penelope hornsey (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2003
Kind of lost for words here in sunny Cornwall. Beautiful and poignant
Blessings Pene****
Gad Bhuwan! How do u do this!!!
Sometimes my own warmth burns my soul’s memoir ....
If you think I am happy, then try being me for once
Then I vow, you will never want to be me anymore
...
I feel this so much have yet been unable to express it so wonderfully.
~Shezz
Oh! Bhuwan come give me a BIG hug.......I know how this feel......so don't feel alone okay....if you do just think of me......partner in loneliness
love
tinka
OH Bhuwan,, {misty tears}}} This one touched me deeply with the lonlieness felt.
"If you think I am happy, then try being me for once
Then I vow, you will never want to be me anymore
For I am the lonesome love, aloft in the forlorn heart
Amongst the flashy lust, and shrunken idyllic trust "
Superb felt poetry Bravo Love n Luck
Peg
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Just wanted to thank you for this and all of your most dynamic poetry.
-C.S.
I want this one for the Winter 2004 issue of SONNETTO POESIA.
Quatrains are just fine in a SONNET journal!
So send it to me ASAP, OK?
Thanks,
Richard Vallance
Blessings Pene****
Sometimes my own warmth burns my soul’s memoir ....
If you think I am happy, then try being me for once
Then I vow, you will never want to be me anymore
...
I feel this so much have yet been unable to express it so wonderfully.
~Shezz
Reindeer
~E
This is awesome, absolutely
a beautiful but sad write..
Trixie
love
tinka
excellent.
William
"If you think I am happy, then try being me for once
Then I vow, you will never want to be me anymore
For I am the lonesome love, aloft in the forlorn heart
Amongst the flashy lust, and shrunken idyllic trust "
Superb felt poetry Bravo Love n Luck
Peg
tony