When I look up to the night sky above
From my village, with all its twinkling stars
I feel, I am in the heaven, joking with the
Angels and playing cards with the gods
I could feel the rapture of an infinite adore
In this scintillating, optimistic heart of mine,
Whenever I see the shooting stars falling
blissfully, like the snowflakes from the sky
Often I jump in contentment, when I see, the
Moon leisurely hovering around the night sky
Amongst the private company of pristine stars
Underneath the domicile of charismatic gods
Sometimes, when I get depressed and low
from my window, I gaze at the pond below
and often I end up fresh as the morning sun,
when I see the moon bathing in the pond below
Innocence, simplicity, conviction and forgiveness
Still prevails, like the silver linings of the cloud
Within the heart of folks, rugged but yet sublime
Like the cactus flower, kissed by the morning sun
River, as fresh as the ambrosia, flows majestically
Like the love in the heart, soothing the thirst of all
Ensnared by the affinity amongst the mortals soul
In this replica of paradise, not far away from core
Ripe paddy field, emblems the growth of the sun
From deep down inside the womb of mother earth
And galvanizes the surroundings, with its tranquility
Bedecked by the grandeur of entrancing luminosity
Salubrious zephyr from the immaculate forest
Glides the soul towards the ecstasy of heaven
And soothes the tiredness, of the village folks
Who all day in the remote field labors much
Cow, buffalo, sheep and goat, munches together
The grasses in the pastoral, with natural love
And in the pond, they drink together, the same water
Never disputing about race, creed, religion and trust
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviews of "My village"
Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
you capture place and scene with an excellence befitting only a true talent
Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2003
yes... i can see it... your words build a beautiful dream...
beautiful..slowed me down for a moment. Thanks you are nice to relax with.
*Marlene*
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
"And in the pond, they drink together, the same water
Never disputing about race, creed, religion and trust "
Dear Bhuwan...oh the village is breathtaking...the poem a work of poetic perfection...but I did not miss the message here...it is in these two lines...and it warmed my heart at the same time chilling me..that animals are more intelligent sometimes than humans....thank you for this..you are a fantastic writer...wish I could come there and look at that peaceful scene..I probably would not ever want to leave...God bless...Floria
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Bhuwan, Wow young man ... if this is your village it is one of th most beutiuful that I have ever seen. Oh gosh, I wish I had the money to come visit you for a while. You are so lucky to live in an atmosphere like this. Bill
Bhuwan, thank you for this divine poetry ...you captured the beauty that surrounds us with such marvelous words, the imagery paints a picture as lovely as a Monet, and better!
This is sublime. It made me want to be there and fell the gentle beauty and serenity of such a place and I loved:
Ripe paddy field, emblems the growth of the sun
From deep down inside the womb of mother earth
And galvanizes the surroundings, with its tranquility
Bedecked by the grandeur of entrancing luminosity
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
The beauty of nature brings you so close to the Divine, it can overwhelm the heart. YOu've captured it beautifully in your work. Bravo.
Bhuwan,
I love this wonderful piece..it's serenity and beautiful images.Outstanding
poetry
Chrissie x
Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Good Morning, Bhuwan
Such a excellent write. I actually feel so relaxed, I am drowsy.
ty
tony
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2003
Bhuwan,
This is rapturing in verses. Excellence. such beauty.
Love the pic too.
"Sometimes, when I get depressed and low
from my window, I gaze at the pond below
and often I end up fresh as the morning sun,
when I see the moon bathing in the pond below"
Peg love n Luck
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*Marlene*
Never disputing about race, creed, religion and trust "
Dear Bhuwan...oh the village is breathtaking...the poem a work of poetic perfection...but I did not miss the message here...it is in these two lines...and it warmed my heart at the same time chilling me..that animals are more intelligent sometimes than humans....thank you for this..you are a fantastic writer...wish I could come there and look at that peaceful scene..I probably would not ever want to leave...God bless...Floria
Reindeer
Ripe paddy field, emblems the growth of the sun
From deep down inside the womb of mother earth
And galvanizes the surroundings, with its tranquility
Bedecked by the grandeur of entrancing luminosity
excellent write
William
Love
Tinka
I love this wonderful piece..it's serenity and beautiful images.Outstanding
poetry
Chrissie x
Such a excellent write. I actually feel so relaxed, I am drowsy.
ty
tony
This is rapturing in verses. Excellence. such beauty.
Love the pic too.
"Sometimes, when I get depressed and low
from my window, I gaze at the pond below
and often I end up fresh as the morning sun,
when I see the moon bathing in the pond below"
Peg love n Luck