Love is a mansion
Build over the quicksand of heart
So diminish your arrogance and sprinkle
The perfume of compassion and solidarity to all
For love is ephemeral and you might sink
Like the waterlogged boat in the ocean of time
Upon the advent of autonomous flood
If you don’t have friends to drag you back
Into the safety of the land and assist you
To build again the mansion of love
Over the stable rock of conscientious love
Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
There is so much truth to this! An intelligent and thought-provoking poem! Great write!
Weeeeeeewww!! this is a gooooooood one Bhuwan!!!
Heeeeeeelp!!
I thinka I'm in troubla!!
hehehehe!!!
love
tinka
Reviewed by ruby singh (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2003
I so agree with u on the role played by friends.....gr8 work.
Reviewed by Gopal Prd.Bhusal
Reviewed on June 21, 2003
What a pleasent ,meaningful& touching. Congratulation Mr.Bhuwan for your poems. Hope you will be able to present more and more in the future. Please do not stop just go a head. I wish you to be on the top
Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2003
What wisdom you share, my friend!!
Peace,
Dove
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2003
You are so right Bhuwan ... for love to survive it needs a solid and stable foundation. What an excellent author you are. Your friend Bill
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Excellent and enjoyable, as always
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Heeeeeeelp!!
I thinka I'm in troubla!!
hehehehe!!!
love
tinka
Peace,
Dove
as always
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