Without each other..You're Nothing! (poem) by Ch'erie de Perrot on AuthorsDen

Without each other..You're Nothing!
by Ch'erie de Perrot → (All Poetry by Ch'erie de Perrot)
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Going through my old pics on disk, I found one that tweaked my memory, so then I went digging and found one of the very first writes I had submitted here...Thought it pertinent to resubmit. Though a spiritual write, I have placed it under relationships, which is the crux of the matter.

Without each other, you're Nothing! Lived they in perfection knew the meaning of affection walking side by side ne'er grew tired of love that transcended human reason An intruder one day determined her to stray so speeled off the lie gave her that fruit to try left her naked, on trial for treason! Though He loved her with his all took the fruit a'fore the fall from Maiden so fair to "That Woman who didn't care" it turned cold, twas the end of the season! His life became hard slog and sweat while She laboured writhed and wept long hours stayed he from home while she pined for his love so alone through the ages, has gone from lesson to lesion! Though warned to stay at each other's side to ignore the one full of evil pride a free will they were given it was both their decision so when will mankind awake and listen! It's Like I can hear the Creator Say..... I gave Him to you I gave you to him I formed him from dust The strength of the earth I plucked you from his Rib to protect his heart You might rhyme!! But I make sense.. Without Each OTHER, You're Nothing! Ch'erie de Perrot Copyright 2003 Revised 2007 CAL Copyright Ausralia Ltd All Rights Reserved

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins

Reviewed on June 27, 2007

Dan Johnson hit the nail on the head. Lovely poetry.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 26, 2007

Ah! Very well said! The first man and woman, alone they would not be anything.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

So true, yet it has the feel of the Millers TALE

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Excellent offering...not too sure if I did read you way back HWEN????

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Beautiful, Ch'erie, truth in thought provoking verse; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by D Johnson

Nice reminder. It's too bad that the only thing in life that really trips us up, is free will.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

a very well written verse-i enjoyed reading this

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Very insightful and heart felt write that does reflect on the value of love and the loss of love as it pertains to the spirit's gift to all of us. Very well done Cherry Pie.

Fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

so when will mankind awake and listen!

A very good question, indeed.