Caress The Inclination (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 22, 2004

Easily I am captured, caught in image, just on the edge of the dream, words paint a picture perfect and a song sweet. Great write.. Walt

Reviewed by Ann Piatt

Reviewed on May 20, 2004

Really enjoyed this piece! The meter and flow were dead on and just moved the whole write wonderfully to the ending. Reads very well aloud!

Reviewed by Anthony Hall

Reviewed on May 20, 2004

Ahhhhhh so delightful! You have captured what is for most of us here, the reason why we write: we 'caress the inclination' brought about by our musings and visions and dreams and endless themes.

So many 'supress' their inclinations, they are imprisoned within their own minds. We should always remember to rejoice at our 'freeness of speech'

Anthony

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2004

Very beautiful poetry and well penned, Poetess. Nestled deep within my chest very nicely. Thank you for sharing it. I enjoyed the read very much. Keep The Faith.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 20, 2004

WOW!! So subtley gentle and persuasive but absolute DYNAMITE!! Especially that last stanza.. in fact, the last two lines say it all for me.. not only sighs, but smiles I find... the story of my life at the moment! Mm-mm playful as a kitten patting at butterflies... delightful, Anita, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2004

I am going to take your word for it Anita....
and "caress the inclination " as you so
poetically put this wonderful message...
hugs..floria

Reviewed by KJ McPhee

Reviewed on May 20, 2004

long lined poem curling and uncurling like fog on the seashore. Nice work

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 20, 2004

Lady A, beautiful poetry and always a pleasure to read.

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Lady A...this one sings out loud...very good indeed...Fletcher B

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

an inspired joy to read ... well penned!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

You must have a large breast

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Ahhhh. indeed!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Sounds like you have arrived where you are supposed to me, and that, dear lady, is one of life's miracles. Good communicating. Good poem. Good stuff.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Just beautiful Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Beautiful and playful poem that lifts the spirits.

"How I cherish these distractions, I've sequestered in my nest
For they've healed the hurt and calmed...this tempest in my breast"

Great lines. Poetry heals the soul.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Lady a, your inner garden is vast and has a world of sweet succulent fruit waiting to be picked and eaten. You never need to come to your garden alone. Your countenance of love lights the way. I very intriging vision has already formed in my mind. I too have desires for love that I seldom express. Hugs Bill

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

(((lady a)))

hormonal or not, you are a poetess, devine :)

beautiful verse!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Ms hormonal laydee A...you are a premier poet
and this is divnely written!A joy to read!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

This is Beautiful Anita!! I love your work!!!!!!!!!!! : )

Jack

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

this is just wonderful