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UNDONE
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By believing passionately in something that still does not exist,we
create it. The nonexistent is whatever we have not sufficiently desired.
Franz Kafka 




UNDONE


You have whispered to my soul
In a hundred thousand tongues
Thru this principal...I'm whole
By your echoes...versed....and young

For I was dumb by circumstance
Mute and blind to sight
Fragile in a solo stance
Spirit....raw....and tight

Your whispers gave me freedom
Your words have made me smile
Beyond the hundred thousand sum
Still counting all the while


 

Dow

A


Taim i' ngra leat - FYF





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 Reviews of "UNDONE"
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 28, 2004
Isn't it just amazing what a well-placed whisper in the ear can do? Ah, heart-tugging enotion.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 28, 2004
Most beautiful and deep touching package Anita!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on July 28, 2004
Ummmmmm.
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 28, 2004
Lady A,
A deep touching write.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2004
Beautiful, beautiful work Lady A......always a pleasure......ty, Dani
Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2004
Lady A - Excellent meaningful verse, great quote.

Amy
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2004
Another great one, just enough said in just enough space. And I LOVE that quote.
Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2004
Lady A..this should be in a romantic card...this is superb poetry...Fletcher B
Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
Reviewed on July 27, 2004
Precious, Lady A. Especially like the second Stanz.
Vicky
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on July 27, 2004
Nicely crafted, resonate verse! Much enjoyed.
Reviewed by Angelica Young (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2004
Wonderful piece! :)

Much Love and God Bless
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 27, 2004
Superb poetry Anita!You sure do know where to
get some beautiful art!;-)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2004
Beautiful write!
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 27, 2004
Wonderful inspiration.
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on July 27, 2004
I had a wisecrack already for beetle boy's quote up top, but your poem was so beautiful, I had to set that aside.



Wonderful work, Lady A. :-)
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2004
An exceptional uplifting write and artwork Lady A. Well-done, Poet.
Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 27, 2004
Very touching and sweet Lady A

I like this one

Peter Paton
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