Hymned Burlesque (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 1, 2004

Giggle, giggle. Loved this.

Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader)

Reviewed on October 30, 2004

And dance they shall
Just wait and see
Just give them air
And let them breathe.

:o

I couldn't help myself.
It just popped right out.

xox D a n a

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on October 29, 2004

I think Voltaire must have been reading the wrong stuff!! Have to agree with Eileen - you are poetry in motion! I'd love to join you on the dance floor, Baby, shaking your booty! "The Girl Can't Help It"! Rhythm and life are here! Go on... open the box!! LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on October 29, 2004

Exceptional write here Anita...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

well crafted

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

Dance On, Lady A! Love the music with this, and, of course, that fabulous quote! I think all of us need to do more of both.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

Lady A, this is a wonderful timeless creation, which illustrates how one needs to keep their feet mind and feet moving forward, through the quagmire of daily life, which far too often traps one inside a locked box! Thank you for sharing your work. Take good care and be well.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

You do your verse with such ease Lady A...you
must be a great dancer, your rhyme and rhythm are
outstanding!

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

Anita,

Extremely well-versed with a dash of vibrance - exceptional write ... love the image!!

Robert

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

I thought I had reviewed this yesterday, I must have not hit the post review button. This is excellent writing, Lady_A!

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

This is so uniquely lovely!
It has fresh words and a bouncy quality to it.

Reviewed by Reginald Birch (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

Ah Anita, what is to dream, we all should at least once a day. enjoyed your dreamy poem, oh and the music.
hope all are well,
Reg.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

Well done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

Our dreams are inspired by God..as is everything Anita...
Rejoice and be glad...everything is as it is meant to be
Peter

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

(((lady a)))

marvelous! such sassiness and playfulness to this well crafted piece--enjoyed :)

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, karla. :)

*mwahhhhhhhh*

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

what perfect rhythm and flow...i loved this