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LIKE A SLOW LICK UP YOUR BRAIN
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Go ahead and play the blues if it'll make you happy~Homer Simpson

 

 

LIKE A SLOW LICK UP YOUR BRAIN

 

Swaddled in the beat, 

By the darkness, in the heat

Bangin' hammer on your soul

Grindin', stridin'....lazy rolls

 

Like a slow lick up your brain

Swirling, teasin'....near insane

Washed by waves of steady thrust

 Primed by rhythm.....near to  lust

 

It penetrates.....you're buzzed....near blown

Inhale....exhale....rolled and stoned

You hear it....feel it....swallow deep

Tight...then loose.....sigh and weep

 

Taste the sounds...that snake around

Python's crawl.....and slither round 

Stroking waves....that grind and slay

Guitar blues..........one smokin' lay

 

(c)2004 Lady A
     

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 Reviews of "LIKE A SLOW LICK UP YOUR BRAIN"
Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)
Reviewed on November 12, 2004
That's awesome! our house in the evening is usually quite a lovely atmosphere of candles and either jazz or blues music

gypsie

Reviewed by Randal Files (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2004
I am a guitar player, and I love the blues, and I love the way you write!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 8, 2004
Lady A,
This ROCKS!!!

Reviewed on November 7, 2004
Excellent write , art , and music here,, great job
Tommy

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on November 6, 2004
Lady A, this piece absolutely ROCKS! Excellent choice of music. The message and poetry increases the feeling one gets and the delight that can only come from deep within by hearing the BLUES played and written so well. Thanks for sharing it. Take care and be well.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 6, 2004
Blue-by-You write Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on November 6, 2004
Great blues write Anita...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed on November 6, 2004
(((lady a)))

now i got that tune stuck in my head--WOW, love this one! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, karla. :)

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on November 6, 2004
Nice and easy connections here Anita...
You burn up the highway with this laid back riff....
Peter

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 6, 2004
Clever, descriptive write that got my feet tapping.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 6, 2004
Cleverly expressed, Anita. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 6, 2004
You didn
t fool me one darn bit and I think you gave us all a lesson on how to do it.

Reviewed on November 6, 2004
"Like a slow lick up your brain" Absolutely great

Reviewed on November 6, 2004
Lady A, It deserves a Grammy!!!

...Michael

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 6, 2004
Yeh, Baby! Funny, I just revamped my Blues Guitarist write, too, recently - only mine was analgesia-based, rather than aphrodisiac - though that too, I have to say!! My man's a Walter Trout fan - only the 4th best-guitarist EVER, according to him; but I have to admit that he trots off down to our local village hall ALONE whenever that Big Guy is in town... he's just TOO raw for my delicate sensibilities! Now BB King might be a different matter... Guess we're just a couple of Chrissy Hynds underneath all that black leather, eh? (And that's just the underwear!!) The Lady goes unzipped...!! Burnin rubber, Honey! LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on November 5, 2004
Very cool! Yes, music can have that effect..excellent, full force, driving description...

Gina

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on November 5, 2004
This is GREAT, Lady_A. I could feel the rhythm and hear the whine.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 5, 2004
You crawled your way into the guts of the blues Anita!
down and delightful;-)I love it!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on November 5, 2004
good pitch and wail. ;-)


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