DULCET SALT (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 14, 2005

The ebb and flow of our lives are entwined with the sea, and this you have written so eloquently...

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Anita,

Superb!!! As exquisite as the gentle sea. Love the imagery and devine flow of this timeless treasure. Beautifully penned!

Cynthia

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Lady A,

Exquisite write ... tantalizingly perfect - beautiful!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

I am in awe..AGAIN!!!...stop it will ya Lady....LOL..
I have saved so many of your poems...geeez I'm running outta space..
Brilliant work...absolutely brilliant!!! You are a credit to the Twin Flame cause..YAY!!!!!

Vesna :)

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

Awesome write Lady A

William .....Peace & Love

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

oh~~~~~this is a wonderful
full of fantasy
and imaginations
this has a wisdom to it as well
enjoyed this very much!!!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on January 31, 2005

Another Beauty here my friend!! Love it!!

Jack

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Lady A,

A stunning poem of beauty and grace--thank you!

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

beautiful write!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Stunning Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

"Dulcet, salty tears of grace

Kissed away.......yet soon replaced

In our realm, each other's sea

Down our depths......is where we breathe"

Loved this Lady A, and of course the entire
piece is masterful and beautiful.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Breath taking. I so love the sea, and everything nature wise to do with it.

Good thing I guess seeing you can never be over two hundred miles from it.

Love all the poetic images..

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Ahhhhhh... Anita, how ethereal, how gently natural is your piece. It floats. It embraces. It touches deeply. The sea as metaphor is a poet's delight, then there's yours. I hear violins; I believe you know the meaning of the word "bliss"... you do it sooooo well. Sigh.. katy xox.

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

I've missed reading your work! Superb imagery. You write with such beauty and grace.
Love Chanti

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

This is an awesome beauty, Lady_A. The tenderness of your pen and the purity of your flowing emotions make this piece honest, sincere and romantic. The grace with which you write always blows me away. Wonderful poetry!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

BRILLIANT write indeed!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Down our depths......is where we breathe

A marvelous poem with a truly marvelous last line; and, of course, any e.e. cummings quote is usually very good.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

Yes I agree with Jerry on this one.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2005

There could be nothing much better than what this lovely poem describes. Ah, yes, sweet tears, kissed away by loving lips, and . . . Oh, okay, about to get carried away here. Great poem.