FREED AND QUENCHED (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 26, 2005

You think you are alone...
I'm a man..surrounded by Pictish females.
I'm alive because they willed it to be so,
That's what I deserve for having sisters.

Haahhhhh.....Shhhhhh...

the milk of love allowed me lyfe
sucked from the teat of a sisters breast.
G

Not for me, your vision of her wilderness...

I would die for her favour..

G

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

Another super, know what yu mena about the bull. G

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

Beautiful and very strong inspiring message.
Be yourself, inner strength determination! Excellent.
Thanks so very much.
Tracey.
bs i'm with ya on that.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

A fantastic poem. Love the music too. I often feel like becoming a hermit. :-) Anita, how did get that large a picture to come through on the den's upload? Share knowledge with a sistah. LOL ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

Simply Awesome...saving this one, I love the music too

Paul;-]

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

Poetry at its best Anita!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

Brilliant ...and the art awesome!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

brilliant!!! Love your work!

Vesna

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

likewise and how boring running with the pack.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

by remaining true to oneself, the pack is merely an obstacle to work around and freedom is the reward as we journey on ...

wise poetry!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

Quite a poetic statement, Lady A, and quite a graphic!

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

Thnx sis, and I now know that I no longer am marked as not one of the pack. Thnx for accepting as I am, and as a writer, even though i don't compare to you. This is marvelous, and very beautiful. Thnx Sis, for sharing. may the Lord Jesus bless you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & (((HUGS))), Your big little sis, Barbie

"If I have to...Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

What BS?! Can't say I've heard any lately, but then, I don't exactly tune in anyway... guess writers are about as pack-like as a herd of cats and equally as intransigent and wilful. Writing for me is not a reason for my sole-trader status, it's an excuse and an explanation. Not hormonal either - just 24/7!! But you can be leader of our pack anyday, Ms Alpha Lady! I'll share a glass of whatever it is you're drinkin and maybe we could do a collab??!! Jus jokin, of course!! Poetry that's taut as an arrow and which scores a bull's eye here! Very well done. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Excellent... being creative, in a mass society, can't compete, with the willingness of self to go alone...

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

OMG! You make me proud to be a loner. Anita, this is so true! To my experience at any rate. Amen to the last comment!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

There is such a meshwork of negativity in this world today. It seems that people love to be angry, find fault and complain, yet when asked who is responsible, they always point the finger at someone other than themselves. This negative aura is suffocating and it tries its best to draw us in. I too have to step away from the masses and remind myself that I love being alive, that I have much to offer and that I am here to love those around me and to enjoy the time I am given here. Attitude is everything, as for me, I will take a pound of positive, please. This is a wonderful offering, Anita. Powerful message. I DO love that graphic too!!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

And which prison did you escape from.

Very inspiring, and out reaching poem..Mrs Hormones..

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Marvelous write and a great example of your unigue writing style and talent Lady A,
Felix

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 29, 2005

Lady A,

THIS is magNIFIcent poetry! To be released of the claustrophobic confines of the masses, she yearns to be free...truly beautiful poem! Enjoyed--

(((HUGS))), love and continued prayers, Karla. :)