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Shark & Goldfish
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Shark & Goldfish

 

He knew the pond held many goldfish

Beautiful, trusting, and unafraid

They were used to finding their own food

But when bread was thrown on the surface of the pond

They all swam towards the vibrations

Drawn by scent perhaps

And curiosity

 

Finding wet crumbs of bread

As a welcome change from pond fare

They began to push each other aside

To reach the prize of white

 

When that happened

He took his old net

The one with a tight weave

And a large hole in it

 

And scooped them up

 

No intentions of eating them

Just seeing if he could do it

 

Capture them, bring them to air

Watch them squirm, gasping for breath

 

Lovely gold fish

 

Then put the net back in the water again

So they could breath while still caught

In his net

 

Some found the hole and escaped

Others gasped after the experience

 

Weak and caught

 

He dropped bread again

Into the net

 

The fish went into a feeding frenzy

 

He lifted the net in the air once more

 

Playing with their lives

 

Because

 

He could

 

Pax

A

8/06



 


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 Reviews of "Shark & Goldfish"
Reviewed on September 1, 2006
Don't we all try something - Because WE CAn - This is great! I love the mystique around the wording Anita, -Curious little tikes - YOu write so elequently! I'm glad I am reading you! HuGs,Sheeeoxo

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on August 28, 2006
Profound twist, PAX.

Doing something because you can....reminds me, that freedom really means being able to choose to do... what is right.

Good one!
Love you, Anita
Rhonda

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 26, 2006
Sounds like Bill Gates on a fishingtrip...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2006
Sounds like Bart Simpson to me.
We can use our liberty for good or ill...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 25, 2006
Intresting Anita, sort of like the little boy who pulled the wings off a fly or the legs of a spider or yes the one who tied things to a cat's tail. Morbid curiosity...wow.

Felix

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 25, 2006
You're really geeting deep these days, Queenie. But this is very good! I think far too many play with others' lives these days.

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on August 25, 2006
The fisherman...caught in the net of control...playimg with life. It remineds me of the way a cat plays with a chipmonk, never truly intending to go in for the kill, rather to play it to death...
Your write is as cartivating as the subject itself and the incredible artwork.
Taylor


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