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Truth's Collision
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Had a glass of wine, and thought about different woman I have known in my life.........Pax A



TRUTHS COLLISION


 


 no one knew who she was
              Indeed least of all herself
        At this point it did not matter
Once the hand was dealt


                    Books and covers are judgement
Strike that statement from the record
She was judged by what was seen
  No more could be expected


All the passing people, all the passing lives
All the masks of survival
 Joggers, daughters wives


Some lives are so simple,
some so  complicated
     some are mapped and plotted
Some are blind and   weighted


Do you see the same as others
When you look into the mirror
                                           
They see outward projections
 losers, watchers, winners



Hermit crabs change the shell,
or home becomes a prision
Tight, confinded,   the screwed up mind
               implodes on truth's collision


pax
A
7/07
 
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 Reviews of "Truth's Collision"
Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2007
I think this is a brilliant look into perception, both self perception as well as how the outside world perceives others. Excellent rhyme, rhythm and flow. Well done, Anita!
~Butch Howard
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 15, 2007
Well written piece...I think we all look at the same thing differently!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2007
Everyone sees others as they fancy. Since we don't have telepathy, it is impossible to see into the inner part of otheers, we can only guess...often the wrong guess. Victor
Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on July 14, 2007
That collision frightens...strong realization excellently expressed. You capture the differences and the difficulties of 'women' in a unique way.

Gina
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 14, 2007
Beautiful thoughts here, Anita, crafted and honed as only you can do in your inimitable rhyming verse. Complex and multi-faceted, such is the many-hued and shaded life of Woman, each a jewel in its own right. I so wish the feminist movement had made more of our strengths in the Feminine, instead of converting us all to female men. The Hand That Rocks The Cradle And All The Other Stuff That Rocks in Life, Rules The World! We would do well to ponder the wonder, as you do here. Bless you for this. Kate xx
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on July 14, 2007
very deep thought and written so very well~

Love,
Susan
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on July 14, 2007
Ex-ce-lent! We rarely see ourselves as others do. Your poem is right on the money$$$$$

terrific!
Love,
Susan
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on July 14, 2007
Deeply affecting, thought provoking reflection, Lady A, excellently penned!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2007
geat dark mirror piece; all those same attributes we recognize in each other, brought out and into the light.....honest write...ness.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 14, 2007
That wine seems to have been a thought provoking muse, Lady A Pax.
Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on July 14, 2007
Very beautifully wrought. -- Jeff
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 14, 2007
well written look at how judgement of others can be looked at
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 14, 2007
Insightful and open look at the reality of the bias of opinion. This goes outside the box in a unique voice that I enjoyed. Well done.

Fee
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