EVE WAS FRAMED (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on March 21, 2003

Cute write ! ; )

Reviewed by B Thomas Daniels (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2003

Hahaha too funny
loved it

Reviewed by Jay G

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

What kind of place would Eden be for us workaholics? I could picture myself strolling through Utopia always being BOTHERED that I should be doing something!!

Reviewed by Kristian Mahrling-Harding

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

i always maintain that eventually the good Lord and i will need to talk. He is supposed to be omnipotent, right?
so how come women were not as well designed as the fruit of the vine? when a tree is thru bearing...the fruit dries up and falls off. women have years of misery, cramps and eventually hot flashes.
all because eve partook of the 'apple'? i thought adam was supposed to be head of the household....the patriarch. he should have stood up to eve and said...'baby...that ain't even fit to make a pie!"
but...noooooo..and then he eats it too. ya see where i'm goin with this....
we get stuck with 9 months of puking, unbearable pain, 18 years of trials, and then we have imbalanced hormones, internal combustion....and what did man suffer??
okay, i guess our only concession is that we can have more than a single orgasm...now ..if the man could only last as long for us to enjoy them~wink& grin~
hugs
krissy

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

Excellent penning...cheers...HUGS>...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

A good way of looking at it! why wasnt adam tempted by a songbird?

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

wonderful write...

William

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

Reading this, I couldn't get one thought out of my mind...
I wish I was that damn snake.
sigh...
-James

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

Nice write Lady A!
Jack

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

Maybe because it's "woman's day" great write!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

Dear Anita, I remember the ID. There is a chance, Adam lied...LOL
It is always great to read your humor.

YF
tony

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

uh oh Lady A sounds like she slipping into the lands of insanity like meLOL this was a awesome poem and i though a guy agree that eve was definitly set up and should ahve been forgiven

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

I think you are right !
Well done, too.

~E