Madness (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2004

very good! i really like your flow on this one!

jessica
aka
gypsie

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on June 2, 2003

Madness...it strikes us all. So true. Wonderful write. S.

Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)

Reviewed on June 1, 2003

Uh.. this is a deep-cutting verse..evasive, elusive, suggestive, baffling, disruptive and full of absent delirium.. oh my God, you succeeded in rationalizing 'madness'!

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

Lady A
Not sure how it is we have missed each other, but I'm thrilled about the connection now! Really flowing with your rhythms--
Have read the opening three stanzas a number of times just to feel it. Vicky

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

Excellent write--especially love that last stanza...

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on May 29, 2003

You freaking threw me for loops here woman! MY LANTA!!! This is one of my new favorites of yours. But I can't decide what I like better of your....THIS ONE grabbed me and pinched my behind..lol. Wonderful wonderful!

Teresa

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2003

Shouting off the highest mountain this was a firework of a write !

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2003

Heanenly Madness

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on May 27, 2003

Anita, I felt my mind swing and sway and establish a rhythm pattern throughout the whole of the poem. Wow. Loved it. Bill

Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)

Reviewed on May 26, 2003

Wonderful write, with such deepness.. I enjoyed this one. :) thanks so much,
Cheers,
~Kari~

Reviewed by The Gentle Man

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

I agree with La Belle. If you're a poet, you have to be a little insane.....smile Thanks for sharing!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

So excellently powerful, I loved this one!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

"First step on the path, first knock on the door
It opens, you peek in....Clutch Love To the Core! "
Wonderful poetry!
Chrissie

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

As always you give us the best! but then you know what madness is as do I;-)

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Excellant Work Lady A!
Sadly I would have to say that we are all a little mad, everyone has a lil twee bit of larceny in them! :O)
~Nikki~

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

We're all a little mad especially if we write poetry, excellent poem Lady A.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Have to be a little mad sometimes
intelligent write

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

divine madnes indeed!

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Beautiful lines in this, Anita. Love is a contradiction full of madness...Life would be warm vanilla without it. Excellent.
Amor

Reviewed by D. Fitzpatrick (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Yes, Lady, "Cluch love to the core!" I have tried,
but love is so elusive. Your poem is wonderful! D.L.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Par Excellance!Good to read you again, Lady A.

tony

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Very nice Lady!!
Jack

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

**applause** well done!!!!! (((HUGS, lady a)))) love, karla. :) love the poem and the pic is awesome!! :)

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Awesome! Clutch Love to the Core!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Powerful and beautiful write.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

The picture reminds me of the soldier's barracks at the Alamo in San Antonio Texas. Poem is excellent. Bravo

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Lady A~
Oh this one is so beautiful excellent
"Quenching parched hearts, dry as the sands
Paradise is renewed, a verdant grassland
This madness we wait for, this madness we fear
Exodus from genesis, so close a frontier
First step on the path, first knock on the door
It opens, you peek in....Clutch Love To the Core! "
expressions so good.
Lady Peg