Within Bounds (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2003

I have missed a lot of your work, which came about the period i was no longer on here, but i'm glad to be back and able to read someone who writes like it should be written...take care...Mark xx

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2003

WaaaaaHHHHHoooo! Get EM! Write your way into his heart! If this would not have been on paper it would have been a slap in the face and then wild sex! You know...that primitive thing we all have in us...that is indeed what does it. LOL....LOVE IT! This one grabbed me.

Thanks,

Teresa

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2003

A very deep and beautiful write that goes so perfectly with the photo that is awsome!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2003

Deep with emotion, beautiful write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

Anita, most profound and eloquent write, I love it, and the way you crafted it. Bravo!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

I am very much liking the rhyme in your poetry!!

Jack

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

Harmonious and giving, Anita, as love should be, a glorious tribute!! :)

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

Love the quotation...
And love your poetry even more--pure beauty...

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

I am in awe of your definition, Anita.
Amor

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

This Is Outstanding lady Anita......and the pic took my breath away!!

Love
tinka

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

Love is exactly this, as our poet Luis de Cam�es says... "so contrary to itself is love itself". And you, my dear Lady, say it masterfully. I loved this poem.
Alexandra

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

Anita,
"And yet I know, you hear them, you feel them deep within
Concieved by our hearts merging, our timeless love begins"
I adore this write! Especially these lines! And that pic, is freak'n awesome!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

(((lady a)))

o, this is beautiful, verse and pic both are WOW--i'm awed by this

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

this is well within the boundries of the heart. a very caressing write

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

Lady A, beautiful write. Very gentle.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2003

Anita,

This piece is a priceless jewel in the treasurechest of poetry! I love it!

~Joseph