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I Never Looked Into her Eyes
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I have a Texas friend that every so often writes a poem or refrain, and sends it to me, and asks me to tweak it or add to it....this is one we came up with last month...(he is into that sad Cowboy stuff, which I am not...but its fun to fake it!)



I NEVER LOOKED INTO HER EYES

I never looked her in the eye
When it was time to say goodbye
I knew that if I saw her pain
That I would surely ........just remain

If it hurt her so bad
If she was so very sad
Then somebody tell me why
I never heard her cry
(this is his refrain)

But I had things I had to do
Yet what they were......I had no clue
The wild wind, was pulling me....
I always knew.....I had to leave

If it hurt her so bad
If she was so very sad
Then somebody tell me why
I never heard her cry

She never ever told me ....no
She never said...please stay .....don't go
I didn't listen, I didn't find
The time to look into her eyes.......

If it hurt her so bad
If she was so very sad
Then somebody tell me why
I never heard her cry

At times I think, I would go back
To try to pick up all the slack
And maybe if I were to try
I know I'd be the one to....... cry

I'm sorry babe.....I didn't know
The hurt I caused, when I'd just......go




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 Reviews of "I Never Looked Into her Eyes"
Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2003
I had some hip-hop on in the background as I read this. The contrast was quite compelling.

Adam

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on October 8, 2003
I'm not into the sad cowboy stuff either but I must admit this is very good.

JC xoxoxoxo

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Very good! I agree with Eileen, would like to hear with tunes! What genre would it fall under? ;)

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Great...I loved these lyrics. An excellent collaboration
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
I love the sad cowboy stuff! lol Great write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Fantastic lyrics, would love to hear it put to music, Great combo, Anita!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
This was very well done Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2003
Well done, I enjoyed this very much. Good collarboration


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