Groping For The Chalkline (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)

Reviewed on January 6, 2004

hehehe,
I especially love the photo with this one!

jessica
aka
gypsie

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 4, 2004

A superb way to write
Have a Great, Prosperous, New Year!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 4, 2004

really like the style and expression in this one!

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2004

I do so like this, hooks you grabs you and only lets you go when you finished reading it...thats what i thought would happen xx very enjoyable read from a very insightfull writer...take care...Mark xx

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2004

You are so original!!!

I love your mind Anita.....and you always find the best pic's for your writing.

ty, Dani

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 3, 2004

Lady A...you clever creative lady,always exciting poems in your den. It's been a pleasure;-)...

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry

Reviewed on January 2, 2004

This is put together quite well, Anita: a pleasure to read and a chuckle or two as well! Can't beat a combination like that. ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on January 2, 2004

Right On We Are ALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL In GUTTER!

TRASK

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on January 2, 2004

Hi Lady A ...this was most interesting ....each and every line...I love the form...it added to the poetry...hope all is fine with you and yours.....floria

Reviewed by Oirdheirc Mor (Reader)

Reviewed on January 2, 2004

Hi Lady A.
I like this Format, it forces the reader to read. which is good.
myself having just mastered posting single lines.
Ambition is a wonderful thing.
How do you do it.
Big Smile.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 2, 2004

Magnificently well done Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 2, 2004

Hi A, the many referecned you utilized hee were fantastic, and the reference to the plans become overgrown, almost like seeded, ehhh ? guess yu got this one right, smiles, al

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on January 2, 2004

This is awesome Anita.One of your best.You get better and better.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap

Reviewed on January 2, 2004

I prefer Oscar Wilde's quote. Very astute of you to post it. Interesting form this epistle took. It kept me reading clear through to the end, which is unusual with a lot of stuff I'm seeing lately.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 2, 2004

Lady A, Like this much. Very down to earth.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 2, 2004

I think we're all groping for that chalkline, every day! Great write, Anita.

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on January 2, 2004

I like this, Anita. Somehow it seems to relate to New Years' resolutions. I agree with Kate. This is fantastic!
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 2, 2004

This is a fantastic write!