When someone has the ability to see beneath the surface still waters and finds those hidden caves within.
If I stopped thinking for a while and put my passions aside Could I reach you still? Will my words enter in to that deepest place you don't reveal? In your understanding of my thoughts I have felt as though I were laid bare and my heart in its fragile beating pulsed warm blood - that blood that is my love upon your hands because you care...
I sorted your poems by category, then selected one from romance. I speared a delicate morsel. It is thoughtful, caring, and sealed with a final line that this reader will not forget. Gasps...
Wonderful write here :) I think we all have that deep place we don't reveal.....
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on December 2, 2004
Chanti, sometimes by putting love on a shelf allows one to explore the deepest recess of ones’ soul, my friend. One could easily apply this marvelous Masterpiece in one’s own life in order to find the way to utopia. Thank you for sharing your poetic inspiring compositions. Take good care and be well.
Simply beautiful! What we all long for is someone that cares enough to search out those hidden places, to delve beneath the surface of our heart and soul...
Reviewed by Still Waters (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2004
A poem that truly reflects the inner beauty of the writer.
this is an exceptional piece Chanti, and I mean that truly. It is clear, it has an extreme good sense of conciseness, and you do not get wordy and boring. This seems to bubble right out of the heart, al
<a href=http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewPoetry.asp?id=122828>revealed </a> See my poem "revealed..." which is a sort of romantic response to your beautiful poem. Chanti, this is absolutely *splendid* poetry, with a subtle, yet seething passion that exudes from every verse! -- Jeff
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2004
Sweet, deep, and absolutley priceless, Chanti!
Just like the author.
I think your words could reach even the coldest
of hearts, and melt it.
I hope the one for whom this is a tribute is worthy
of such splendid devotion.
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Beautiful poetry! It is a rare treasure to find someone who can care so deeply! Your expression speaks from your heart and soul.
Cynthia
A treasure to keep forever.
ty, Dani
Beautifully penned!
Lisa
cool pic and fantastic write--enjoyed both :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
This is surely total commitment.
Sandie Angel :o)
Just like the author.
I think your words could reach even the coldest
of hearts, and melt it.
I hope the one for whom this is a tribute is worthy
of such splendid devotion.
well done Chanti
Felix
Delectable composition Chanti...
Peter
from the soul...always divine;-)!
beautiful poem!