The Intensity of Love (poem) by Chanti Niven on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2005

Love the insanity of this love..wow!!!

Vesna*

...of course he'll stay!

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Outstanding!!!
you captured the emotions here very well!!
enjoyed

Reviewed on February 3, 2005

What a beautiful tender madness you portray in this poem, and how true it is to the see-saw character of the power of love.

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Yes, it is very hard to describe, to write about, but this is fantastic.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Stunning!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

This is beautiful and that feeling can last. After being married for fifteen years, my husband and I still can't get enough of each other.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Beautiful Chanti!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

I would say you have come so close to capturing it Chanti, this is exquisite poetry.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

So beautiful Chanti, this was wonderful, love how you expressed this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by D May (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Wonderfully written.

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Hey Chanti, Ya know truly, I think most men would like a girl like this coming after them, kinda like a seismic or volcanic reaction, an eruption. But to spill forth such radiance too, would I do suppose additionally require proper catalyst (s), but thanks for the insight here that this all loons gently, awaiting resurrection, inside the body, psyche, or your ordinary woman, Al

criply said

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Yup you got it Chanti.

Also Cor:13 is the best expression of love I've found, with the song of Solomn too..

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

You've captured it beautifully embrace it for eternity.

Paul;-}

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Chanti dear;

I have been 'in and out' with illness all week, but was so
happy to find your marvelously composed tribute. It is one
of the most emotionally moving pieces you've done yet.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

The title is soooo appropriate cause this is an intense write and has captured as you said earlier the essence of love very well. You are an artist Chanti.

Felix

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

Love is difficult to capture in words because it imore of a feeling and/or image than something that can be described. Still, everyone has had a go at describing since time immemorial. All one can do is capture the essence as it occurs to the individual. For each it will be different. For each it will be special. For each it will be the strange joy of a kind of pain.

Nice write.

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on February 2, 2005

capture in the cameras eye chanti, great love piece, I stay and face. G

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

a stunning, sensual write....

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

I am left speechless, Chanti! LOVE to you. Regis

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Love the way you ended this one.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Your heart poured through your pen when you wrote this one, Chanti. It is so gorgeous. It would be wonderful if a person we felt this way about also felt the same way about us, but it is usually one or the other and far too rarely both.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

You captured the intensity with an
exquisite expression of love Chanti!

eileen

Reviewed by Nila Jamier (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Beautiful powerful verses of romantic confession this is outstnding.:)
Niley

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Very well said. I think this is the type of love that we all strive for and hope for, and when it does finally come, we don't always know the reasons for it, nor do we fully comprehend the magnitude of the two combined... becoming a whole... much greater than the sum of the individual parts. If you ever get a chance at such a momentous and moving and magnificent love - don't let ANYTHING stop you! -- Jeff

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

The things we say, isn't that hard. The things we do, come naturally. But the staying power, makes love grow, spiritually, emotionally, physically...

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

The staying part seems to be the hard part for alot of men doesn't it? You've accomplished something hard to do Chanti...you took an old subject and made it refreshing, and downright ravishing. Wonderful write my friend. Michelle

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

I don't think much more needs to be said. Yep. I do think you hit upon it. Good.

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Love is such a universal yearning and is all consuming... beautiful words, indeed.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2005

Yes I agree Chanti that you do face it and embrace while staying.