Been Visiting an Old Sweetheart
Named Elizabeth the last few days
“Just living is not enough…
One must have sunshine,
Freedom,
And a little flower.”
Hans Christian Anderson
I can hear her calling
While I’m fast asleep
Her beauty is tremendous
My love she’ll always keep
I’m happy when I’m with her
I’m very sad when I must leave
Time away from her is dreadful
It offers absolutely no reprieve
I excitedly awaken
At the very crack of dawn
Within only a few minutes
I’m up and dressed and gone
As I rush down the road to meet her
I hear her whispering in the breeze
She murmurs that she’s missed me
My pending presence makes her pleased
She knows that I respect her
And that my love forever will be true
She knows that when I’m with her
My heart and soul are never blue
Soon I reach her dwelling
And I rush to leave my car
I scurry down a wooded path
Knowing now she can’t be far
I pass a tiny babbling brook
That meanders so serenely
I even hear it welcoming me
As I listen very keenly
Soon the giant pine trees
Are welcoming me back too
And my heart is now soaring
Like an eagle in the blue
Suddenly the forest erupts
With melodious bird songs
Even they have welcomed me
And for their music I have longed
I’ve finally reached her enchanting side
She quickly fills my heart with pleasure
She is my gorgeous tiny wilderness lake
The end of the rainbow – a real treasure
My lovely Lake Elizabeth is located – somewhere in the northwoods.
I found her many years ago on my wanderings,
And I’m constantly drawn back to her side.
Luckily, Rebecca is very understanding.
She doesn’t mind sharing me with Elizabeth at all.
Sublime words create imagery and rhyme as beautiful as the rainbow itself ... a superlative write to behold!!
Blessings my friend,
Robert
Gina
What a surprise.
Nice write.
(I'm in withdrawl Ed, but the rainbow calmed me down).
Seriously though, nice reflection of your love for the "less icky" side of nature Bro.
blessin's
c.
Sandie May Angel
Beautiful!!
Love Tinky
you romantic you...glad rebecca isn't jealous. :)
beautiful write :)--enjoyed
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
with their wife, instead of being hooked by some human
who cannot begin to compare or compensate for.
BTW...was it Lake Elizabeth where you left your tennies?
Heee heee....
This one took we right along with you for the ride and I hope you didn't mind as this place of beauty I understand how it hooked you.
We all need these places to retreat to and relax and find things in our inner souls.
Excellent write
Tommy
for the place we used to go in Wisconsins north woods. I may have mentioned before the island my brother-in law-family owned we had to leave our cars in the woods and take a boat to the island where they had a main cabin and 5 smaller ones. We stayed in the main one and had some of the most wonderful times I can remember! It was near Hayward
An incredible poem and so vivid in imagery, a thrill to be walking amongst your poetic masterpiece. Beautiful presentation.
Warm hugs
Elga