“Living might mean taking chances
But they're worth taking
Lovin' might be a mistake
But it's worth making”
Mark D. Sanders & Tia Sillers,
I Hope You Dance
He was embittered and very much alone
His relationship days were now sadly over
He was heading off to the wild blue yonder
To live a hermit’s life in the untangled clover
She had hurt him to the very core
He was done with love and all too blue
It was really time to move along now
Time to figure out what the hell to do
He soon packed all of his belongings
And gassed up his old pickup truck
His love life days were surely over
His relationships had run out of luck
And he drove for many long lonely miles
Through pastures once filled with desire
But he had truly become a lone wolf now
To a life of solitude he would now aspire
But as he approached the mountains of no return
She was magically waiting there to hitch a ride
At first he didn’t think that he would even stop
But eventually he put aside his foolish pride
He pulled his truck over to the side of the road
Her demeanor quickly captivated his heart
And as they rolled along together in his truck
He was soon struck again by cupid’s love dart
Even though he had been hurt very badly
She soon managed to take all his pain away
And he’s forever grateful that he saw her there
And took a chance on love once again that day
They’ve been cruising life’s highway together
For many truly wonderful romantic years now
And he shudders to think what he might have become
If he hadn’t had the courage to brake and slow down
“Don't let some hell bent heart
Leave you bitter
When you come close to selling out
Reconsider
And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance
I hope you dance”
What an incredible write. You most certainly have the knack of touching deep, and I am with you on this one....Dance and dance well and with gusto, it is only a fool who sits it out !
warm hugs
Elga
Superaltive, quite superlative ... 'top-drawer' all the way!!
Best regards,
Robert
This is the best yet of all I have read of
your poems.
Keep on truckin'
Pat
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
Nobody weaves stories like you do. This is no exception--I, too, believe it is one of your best. BRAVO!
((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla. :(
when you write like this! Nothing like sharing life's
experiences when you have the ability and talent to do it
the way you do! Kudo's!
etw
You are living proof of being a lucky bar...I mean winner..
Good one Ed...
Something to ponder...and read over and over again!!
Powerful message in this one!!
Love Tinky
Touching, sad and beautiful sentiments.
Lisa