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Frozen in Time

by Mr. Ed — Read all 1,530 poems by Mr. Ed

Saturday, November 26, 2005


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“What we remember from childhood we remember forever –


permanent ghosts, stamped, inked, imprinted, eternally seen.”


 


Cynthia Ozick


 


 


Strolling through the woods


At the end of November


Enjoying the tranquility


When I suddenly remember


 


My thoughts become frozen


Back in Nineteen Fifty Five


She’s standing just ahead


And she’s very much alive


 


This is where I spotted her


Dressed in her pink snowsuit


She was standing right there


With shiny black rubber boots


 


Holding her father’s hand


On this frigid autumn day


They’re laughing and talking


When she gets the urge to play


 


She breaks her father’s grip


And goes racing up the river


Her father cries out a warning


As the thin ice begins to quiver


 


Soon the fragile river ice cracks


And her pink snowsuit disappears


Her father’s anguish echoes loudly


As his shouts mingle with his tears


 


As I stood frozen on this river bank


That cold autumn day so long ago


I watched them bring her body out


It now looked so lifeless and so cold


 


As I continue on my journey today


I try to shake this image from my mind


But I just can’t seem to do that right now


It’s still much too vividly frozen in time


 


Life can often be so very cruel


For so many of earth’s innocents


I somberly walk on through these frozen woods


Still picturing that little lost girl in this long ago event


 


 


©2005, Ed Kostro


 

 


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Reviewed by Shoma Mittra
Reviewed on November 27, 2005
Beautiful and haunting imagery. The reader feels as much as you ...superb poetry. Thank you for sharing - shoma

Reviewed on November 26, 2005
The memory of this loss is very sad. You reduced the weight of the pain by passing it to us and for me it is a pleasure to share it with you. Thanks Ed.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on November 26, 2005
this is so sad. it makes me think of that little girl and her dad up in wisconsin that drowned this week beneath the ice while skating. so tragic. really heartbreaking. the poor mom. how will she survive? what will she see for the rest of her life....oh god...i feel her pain and sadness right now....

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2005
heartbreaking write.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 26, 2005
nicely done

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 26, 2005
As long as she is remembered, no matter by who, she is NEVER lost...Ed

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on November 26, 2005
Your memory of this horrible event is written with eloquence. But I have a very sick feeling after reading it. So sad that you must carry this around for life. Maybe there is a reason why you were there to witness.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 26, 2005
just the other day, a father died trying to save his daughter in a smiliar situation ...



of course, such an event had a powerful emotional impact on you ... through the vivid recapture of your experience, this poem allows your reader to experience this sad occurance by incorporating strong imagery with sorrowful lament ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 26, 2005
Ed your remembrance though sad can also be taken as a way this child will never be forgotten by you, and the emotions she stirs in you can be ones that have strengthened your character.We learn to look at the duality, in all things, there is positive and negative.

Thanks for sharing this, it helps when we learn to embrace all memories good and bad happy and sad.Your poem expressed it beautifully!



Love,

Eileen

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 26, 2005
This just happened again a few days ago but the father was lost also as he dove in to rescue his son who had fallen through the ice. Yes these can be lasting impressions on ones mind when seen first hand.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on November 26, 2005
Trauma never seems to soften with the years. To watch her be so very alive only to see her lifeless form pulled from the frigid water moments later is a shock that will never become easier to remember. They say that when we feel certain emotions, chemicals are released in our bodies and that each time we recall that emotional event, the same chemicals are released again, causing us to relive that moment. For some things, that would be good, like the moment we say our wedding vows or the birth of our children but for those things that cut us to the core, the pain of the moment seems to follow us through our lives. I just heard a similar story that happened yesterday, but both the child and her father were lost as he made an attempt to save her. Such a sad memory, Ed, but your story/poem is exceptionally well written.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 26, 2005
Haunting write...with vivid imagery Ed!!

Love Tinky

Reviewed by Suzy Karnow (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2005
So very well written Ed!

Reviewed by Debashish Haar
Reviewed on November 26, 2005
This is a very thoughtful poem, with a sense of then and now...Narrator gives a twin view, which expresses the changes in his/her life.

D


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