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Bikini Monday
by Elaine Carey → (All Poetry by Elaine Carey)
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What's a girl to do when Mr. Right turns into Mr. Not-Right-Now?


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She'll shop the Galleria

and purchase a bikini

call off work on Monday

and sip a Margarita

with her girlfriends on the beach.

She'll hope her ex-fiance

will hear she's running carefree

and realize what a fool he is

now that she's out of reach.

She'll spread her affections

out like captured sea urchins

to dry in the sun,

though they'll never be the same.

The pink glossy memory,

like hollowed, lifeless sea shells,

wildlife held so briefly,

that never could be retained.  


She's looking for a Tuesday


and a love without illusion,


a less-fragile union


that will hold up in the rain.


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 Reviews of "Bikini Monday"
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
charming write, bess! well done! LOL at sandie may angel's comment!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Love the way you have done this. Great write!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
absolutely charming!

Reviewed on September 6, 2004
If Mr. Monday can't fit the ring, then perhaps Mr. Tuesday will. Good poem.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Bess what a creative lovely poem! Very unique!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
nice write, Bess

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Couldn't resist the poem behind that title. Maybe she will catch up with him on Thong Tuesday. Too bad they both missed Speedo Sunday.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Sounds like fun to me. Great ending.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Wonderful write,Bess
Peter


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