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Thus hath the candle singd the moath
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"The Merchant of Venice", Shakespeare

Moth drawn to flame...irrestible, so dangerous. Flight to light...disappearing into that beautiful consuming fire, beckoning...lending to downfall. Oh, candle blow out...transform the moth. fly as doves...Wake the dawn with a winged heart...essence divinity. Accepting nothing less than a mate, mind unburdened, soul free...assisting the heat of the flame, warm bodies colliding with love...an abundance of fireworks within. Glowing embers...fuel and feed that eternal flame for life. (c)copyright10November2010vivianldawson

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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)

Reviewed on May 26, 2011

Vivian, This is really good, the theme isn't new but you have a new slant, "flight to light", Neat alliteration. The bodies colliding captures passion and happenstance simultaneously. The fireworks reference speaks for itself. Good work

Reviewed by Cliff Long (Reader)

Reviewed on May 13, 2011

A simple moth. Consumed by fire, transformed into a white-hot embracing with the candle united. You have a gift for making mundane things come to life.

Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)

Reviewed on May 13, 2011

VIVIAN,A BEAUTIFUL WRITE..SHAKESPEARE IS SMILING...ANNA

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2011

Lovely writing sweet lady as always...sighh.....Hugsss

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 11, 2011

Beautifully stated with heart and soul...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on May 11, 2011

A fascinating write indeed Laura

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on May 11, 2011

Vivia, I dare say that somewhere Shakespeare is applauding. -gene.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 11, 2011

Ah, like so many other similar situations . . . . Opposites attract, my friend.

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