Are you just watching?
Or cultivating your life with glory
letting your love bask in between
One day...your life will stream before
your eyes with the power of deduction
You to ensure it's worth in the reviewing
(c) Omnipresence 20June2010
Vivian L. Dawson
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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on June 25, 2011
This is certainly a call to seize the day, watching or cultivating? We all do too much watching. Your final line is a perfect example of modern idiomatic expression.
Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2011
beautifully written vivian...live life to the fullest and have no regrets tomorrow. blessings, anna
Living and loving everyone as ourself every day of our life is good advice. Yes, let the review passing before our eyes be one to be proud of. Good offering, wise words, good read, my friend.
Joy L. Hale
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 18, 2011
Kinda resembled my poem today a bit, Vivian. Not in the structure, but more in the gist. These are lovely words, but with a serious message.
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