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Barely Weaned for this Hallowed
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It is not easy being a crustacean
in a pot...Am I the trick or the treat?

Not quite sure what this is all about!
Perhaps needing to
appear as a cute
bug not to eat instead

Will I grow up to find out
what I am to
be? from the
many faces of a spooky
Hallowed Ween


(c) Barely Weaned for this Hallowed
22October2011
Vivian L Dawson

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Barely Weaned for this Hallowed"
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 24, 2011
Vivian,
This is very clever and charming indeed;
beautiful words and pic.
reminds me in a way of how some mothers
place their toddlers in buckets of water
(water up to the chest only!) during the hot
season here in parts of Asia.

John

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 24, 2011
What a cute wee one, (looks like a little lobster) :)

Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2011
Hope this turned out OK in the end; it's a bit worrying to note that the grown up in the picture is wearing a chef's jacket. The baby does look good enough to eat it must be said. Cute little poem too!

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on October 23, 2011
So adorable!
I love the cleverness, the playful title!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on October 23, 2011
lol. Love the pic. A poor crab about to be boiled? At such a young age. Enjoyed. Liz

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 23, 2011
It is not easy being a bug
in a pot...

It sure ain't!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 23, 2011
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 22, 2011
Cute pic & poem...e

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on October 22, 2011
This is absolutely adorable poetry well done my friend Laura

Reviewed by Cliff Long (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2011
A nice trick, and it saves diapers.
I hope that you find out what to be when you grow up.
I'm looking forward to finding out when I grow up too.

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on October 22, 2011
The bug looks like he/she has a lot of questions also! So cute!

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 22, 2011
A scared bug it appears to me.


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