A sweet and steamy perspective in this very atmospheric reflection!
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2011
there is something severely sensual about the sumptuous imagery and sonorous sounds in this sweet lyric, Vivian... nice work if you can get it and you get it, got it, good!
I think "steamy" would describe this piece well. I like the idea of collective pools to dip into, a good metaphor. The bliss, mist alliteration ain't bad also.
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Blessings,
Christine
Joy L. Hale
where mist is passion and possibility..
steamy indeed, Vivian.
John