Butterfly so free to roam
so sweet like cream take
us with you to transcend
happiness it will bring with
freedom to ring truth from
mountaintops as dew drops
into heightened shades of
confident magenta for one's
ultimate coming of age as it
descends into consciousness
One of natures most beautiful and delicate creations. wonderfully writen.
Stay well and keep writing
Eddy
Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2012
I think it was Nietzsche who said, "We should try to stay as close to the flowers, the grass, and the butterflies as a child is who is no bigger than they are." This little gem seems to show that the writer has managed to retain that sense of wonder.
Butterflies are beautiful little souls Vivian :) They also touch you when you think of a loved one who has crossed over to the other side when you are missing them.
Intriguing title, alluding to perfect sight, which zooms in for the closeness of dew drops, the lift of 'heightened shades of magenta' to the fall into consciousness. This read for me like a swish of language that was delicate and dimensional. Very much enjoyed this reading experience, Vivian. ~~ Diana
O, that the butterfly could take us there… ascending to the mountain top!
Ron
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2012
...ah yes, life is but a passing stage... as this deft delivery from form informs... we await delivery from this consciousness... into what will yet be revealed... perfect metaphor her, perfectly expressed...
Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2012
VIVIAN, ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF POETRY OF MY FAVORITE THE BUTTERLY. EVERY WORD..WRITTEN WITH DEPTH AND BEAUTY. ANNA
Each person is but a grain of sand resting beside the sea. This thought sets the tone for Jill Eisnaugle’s latest poetry collection, Beside Still Waters.
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
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Stay well and keep writing
Eddy
Lovely poem
Love and Light
Lily
Regis
Shades of magenta brilliance.
The heart of a butterfly's movement
in freedom. Lady Mary Ann
Much peace love and light
Amber
Deborah
just keep them away from the road as on a car hood,
they don't look anymore good...
Ron
budd