Distant memories plateau the
mountain tops but in the valleys
I search for meanings nestled
in my sub conscious mind where
deeper feelings lie for a love
I once owned
Until a garden has no more roses
and a rainbow no longer promises
gold I will still love You
Unrivaled I remain waking up just
honoring today until shadows of
you cross my vision when we are
joined once again and day is done
(c) Off the Beaten Path
03January2013
Vivian L Dawson
You still own that love
no-one can take it away from you
Your heart is filled with love...
a beautiful love you pen here so
intimately and beautifully... you
create a wonderful vision for us to
experience...
This one is particularly marvelous...
I just love it Lady Vivian...
Lost love has been a staple of poets since time immemorial and it must be difficult to find a new angle. From Arnold to Wilde everyone has made an attempt, you have put your own feminine stamp on the subject, it reads well and I enjoyed it.
Unfortunately many are in the same situation, Vivian. This is a beautifully rendered poem about love lost or gone, but still remains embedded in the heart.
Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2013
time goes by...but a love from the past..still lingers in the heart. thanks for this one vivian..touched me heart...anna
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
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Nestled in once and again. Lovely thoughts.
Lady Mary Ann
Sleep tight, Blessings xo
Christine
no-one can take it away from you
Your heart is filled with love...
a beautiful love you pen here so
intimately and beautifully... you
create a wonderful vision for us to
experience...
This one is particularly marvelous...
I just love it Lady Vivian...
Love and Light
Lily
budd