Beneath the veneer of style candid always not people appear
acknowledge trust and follow angel flying high spreading love by song bird lullaby giving wings above a tide
so that water
flowing over as surf
won't be
coming back the
other way rather rhythmic carrier wind cohesion wing
upon
wing
OK...I enjoyed the first few lines and then...the bright green color masked the words. The color matters because my eyes are very light sensitive. Perhaps I am a minority but I have had to change colors in my OWN poems because I am unable to relax and read my own work. Charcoal blacks, dark blues and dark greens are good. Yellow is impossible to register as is orange and bright green. Do you see what I mean?
Duality says we each have this angel and to ignore her would not be beneficial to our spiritual self, and besides, who can turn a deaf ear to an angel?
Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2013
BEAUTIFUL VIVIAN,,CAN HEAR THAT SONG BIRD...MAKING HIS BEAUTIFUL MUSIC.
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Peace, love and blessings to you,
John Michael Domino
words you have presented "Lady Vivian"
Love and Light
Lily
An angel whispers the love this rhythmic sweet song wing upon wing
gathers in a lullaby.
Lady Mary Ann
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
budd
Regis
Always,
Deborah