~Trippin' Rainbow's Edge~ Making love symbolically being
under a rainbow's amalgamation
of lights worthy of experiencing
a rainbow body out from the
shadows bridging sky and earth
up lifting any umbrella to let go
(c) Trippin' Rainbow's Edge
04July2013
Vivian L Dawson
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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2013
Pretty psychedelic this one, all those colors, trippy words. I was back in 1975 all over again.
~Lady Vivian~
Rainbow's bridging sky and earth for love's symbolic light.
Umbrella shelters the uplifting verses.
Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2013
ditch that umbrella !! lo0l hg
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2013
Ah cupid's rainbow is freshly bent to cascade colour and penetrate to the heart of love's deep desire... lovely image, lovingly represented in verse, Vivian...
The lights and sounds around us is ours for the viewing and hearing once we shed the umbrella which blocks these tender and special moments. That's my take and I'm sticking to it.
The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
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Peace,
Dayvid
Ron
we do let go...for the view
is always amazing
Empyrean Skyway
Vickie
Rainbow's bridging sky and earth for love's symbolic light.
Umbrella shelters the uplifting verses.
Lady Mary Ann
Roger
I did in Pennsylvania and I drove right through
where it either began or ended
love & peace be with you
William