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Reflections of the past
by Denise Edwards → (All Poetry by Denise Edwards)
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Ah, young love!


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They serve cookies and a red punch
The music has the boys tapping their feet
girls stand guard of each other
The streamers catch the eye
of the auburn haired girl
A fiery headed boy notices and smiles
she looks away shyly
her dress is yellow and has a wide hem
the yellow satin ribbon that laces her long hair
is a stark contrast to her smooth brown skin
the red head boy moves closer
to the auburn haired girl
 nervous spasm over takes him
but he asked the girl to dance anyway
she is awed by the red of his hair
and the green of his eyes
she takes his hand and his heart sails away
his lack of skill has her giggling
a smile brightens his freckled face
the night started out as a chance for disaster
as the young teens experience their first dance
But, the red haired boy thinks the night has just gotten better
as he holds an auburn haired princess in his arms
yes indeed, life itself, just got a whole lot better!
.................And 10 years has not changed a thing!

 

 


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 Reviews of "Reflections of the past"
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 20, 2008
I love the way this unwound and brought back so many sweet and wonderful memories...for me it was sock hops after school on Friday in a darkened gym...girls on one side, boys on the other but...every now and then a connection such as the one you described came to be.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on August 20, 2008
So touchingly romantic! Your writing talent puts the reader there, enjoying every minute! SC

Reviewed on August 20, 2008
Such an emotive and nostalgic look at young love.

Reviewed on August 19, 2008
What a great love story Denise, and you told it so well!
Easy flow of this auburn princess and red hair green eyed guy/boy!
10 years and going strong! This is Super!
I'm happy for you both! Best of Wish and Congratulations1
WRITE-ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Soulful SHEExoo
STay Positive!
You have such an easy style to your writing, that I find inviting...

Reviewed on August 19, 2008
Beautiful, Denise, wonderfully imaged verse. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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