this morning I thought an old nemisis was returning, thankfuly I was wrong.
Sensations of disconnection
from previous firm surroundings
becomes queasy verticle spin.
As if your entire frail physique
were a Ferris Wheel's main axel
life tumbleing ever forward.
From underfoot to overhead
around again, around again
wretching at this continuum.
Unable to focus nor stand
equilibrium all but gone
still dry heaving, everything lost.
Finally you find some solace
in horizontal surrender
until your world's again balanced.
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Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)
Reviewed on July 24, 2012
I hope this is a thing of the past and not on-going. You have certainly captured the reality of such with perfection..
My first time to your sight, but when I saw the title, I just had to read your offering. As a fellow sufferer, your words are so "right on." I would have nothing to add to the excellence of your words! A very good and expressive read. Here's hoping that both of our worlds stay calm and upright.
I can empathise with your words and situation...I had a similar experience which lasted many months...when it does end, the memory of it can haunt...I am relieved for you that yours hasn't returned. An eloquent description...
Best wishes,
Diana..
Budd,
I've had inner ear trouble for years and often wake up dizzy, so I can identify with this write. Its a horrible feeling when everything around you is spinning, and all it takes in a slight motion to get it started.
Strong imagery mark this entry, utilizing unique objects and sensations to explore the precarious nature of life. Well done. A possible nit: worlds or world's??????
Oh my, I can feel this unbalance. I had vertigo three years ago and it isn't fun. I believe it took over 3 months to completely get over it. I do not want to go back down that road that's for sure. You have described it perfectly!
Ah, the title made me thing of the movie, Vertigo, with James Steward and Kim Novak.
This has to be an awful situation. I know about losing control, because I have anxiety attacks from time to time, not as bad as they used to be, but bad enough.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
Mary Angela Nangini's poems celebrate the richness of life and love. From the city to cottage-country and the roads in between, Nangini explores the changing seasons of her varied region. (This book will soon be reprinted in hard cover.)
Sandy
Love ya!
Jane
Anna
Joy L. Hale
Great description, by the way. Wise choice to use italics.
Not sure why, but they increase the dizziness.
Hmmm. Better not read it again. Anyway, not while I am woozy from lack of sleep.
Be well !!
xOx Phyllis xOx
Ron
typo = Worlds - World's
Best wishes
Ruan
Best wishes,
Diana..
I've had inner ear trouble for years and often wake up dizzy, so I can identify with this write. Its a horrible feeling when everything around you is spinning, and all it takes in a slight motion to get it started.
Blessings
+Linda
Here's to being wrong every now and then. Cheers! Dick
Peace, love and light,
Amber
This has to be an awful situation. I know about losing control, because I have anxiety attacks from time to time, not as bad as they used to be, but bad enough.