As I move into this holiday time
I find myself most thankful for love
Then for health and my happiness
That I have become blessed with
By a green eyed beauty
with silken dark hair
and a true heart that i feel
does love me
Lovely. Such simple wording but it says it all. And I can't help but notice - not sure whether intentional - that the words form an inverted triangle, with the last word, the single word "me" carrying the most weight. I enjoyed this!
You are indeed blessed, Budd. A green eyed beauty is about as good as it gets! Hold on to this treasure tightly and never let her go!
Joy L. Hale
Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)
Reviewed on November 9, 2012
It's beautiful to love and to be loved. Your green eyed lady is a very precious blessing to you.
Your poem doesn't only have the form of a diamond, it is a diamond.
There is nothing more beautiful
than to know one is love and accepted
for who they are. It is always a precious
gift... and something we all desire, for me it
is easy to love, for I love so many wonderful people...
This is not to say I take love lightly, not just a word I
throw about, it is a gift, not just a word... and shared with
those I have the utmost respect for, compassion for, and friendship
with...
All touch my life one way or the other for all enter as they are supposed to enter...
The simplest of personal perceptions are often the most impactful, as they have the ability to become one with the reader's own convictions. A finely spoken and quiet gift of thanks.
Oh wow... I just posted a piece called 'Recognizing'.. talk about two poems that go together...lol This is simply enchanting and reminds me of another place and time in my life...
Myrna
Beautiful. Love the heart shape too.
Mary
Rebecca
Ron
*Budd*
plus a talent to express it
Lady Vivian
Continued success~
Barbara J Henry
Lovliest lady precious in beauty and love she reminates
to you. Beautiful blessings.
Lady Mary Ann
Deb
Love ya!
Jane
Joy L. Hale
Your poem doesn't only have the form of a diamond, it is a diamond.
Beautifully done Budd
Deborah
than to know one is love and accepted
for who they are. It is always a precious
gift... and something we all desire, for me it
is easy to love, for I love so many wonderful people...
This is not to say I take love lightly, not just a word I
throw about, it is a gift, not just a word... and shared with
those I have the utmost respect for, compassion for, and friendship
with...
All touch my life one way or the other for all enter as they are supposed to enter...
Beautiful Budd a gift well written
Love and Light
Lily
Myrna