Swirls of purple gossamer
hiding blue patches of hate. A tender heart lives in fear
hidden in ebony's crate. Whence will come the protector
whilst it be when far too late.
On unseen airwaves he nears
slays red demons to abate. Canst the white now reappear
as love has been shown so great. Only time, when times so dear
will show the truth of thier fate.
THIS IS HAPPENING MORE AND MORE...JUST WHEN YOU THINK YOU'VE READ THE STORY OF SUCH CRUELTY AT ITS WORSE...THEN ANOTHER APPEARS. WHAT IS THIS THING OF LOCKING CHILDREN IN CRATES AND CAGES? MY GOD...TRULY THE WORLD DOES WAX WORSE AND WORSE. I PRAY THAT THE MUCH NEEDED EMOTIONAL AND MENTAL HEAL PROCESS IS SURELY AVAILABLE AND ADMINISTERED TO THOSE THAT ARE RESCUED IN TIME. THUS YOU ARE SO RIGHT...ONLY TIMES SO DEAR WILL REVEAL THE AMOUNT OF SCARRING THAT REMAINS. SO THEN, FOR THOSE THAT DO NOT SURVIVE...HAVE THEY NOT GONE TO A SO MUCH BETTER PLACE, INDEED? A FINE, SO SAD WORK, BUDD. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)
Reviewed on January 31, 2013
Your poetry is stunning, as always. Stopped by to read you and to say hello sir
It is always extremely sad when a tender heart lives in fear.
Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2013
Seen from a poetical point of view, this is a very good write Budd.
Looking at the content, the sky is more than only grey , you catch at the last straws of hope.
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
Good writing, Bud.
Connie
It's a good introduction to your poem then you lead into what the poem is about.
Sandy
God Bless You,
Deborah
Looking at the content, the sky is more than only grey , you catch at the last straws of hope.
Keep these straws Budd and hold them tight
Gerrit
"so dear"
Hearts so Free
Lady Vivian
William
Swirls of purple gossomer..a tender heart as love has been shown.
Colours of hidden ebony's crate whilst it be. Splendid write my
friend.
Lady Mary Ann
Ron
Cheers,
Dan
Pity all must be hidden and the tender
little heart lives in fear...
As Jerry says, difficult to remove ourselves from
this sort of thing...
Beautiful picture here Budd as it is written in your
words, of course not a beautiful situation...
Love and Light
Lily
Love ya!
Jane