Sitting on their couch in the predawn light
sipping on the coffee, his thirst to slake. Delighting in the view of her at night
her carafe and cup awaiting her wake.
A chocolate kiss and single rose
placed in front of his offerings of love. To this emerald eyed she in repose
who blesses his life, a gift from above.
As he rises to leave for work does call
he steps close to gently kiss closed eyelids. Whispering softly his love eternal
A last turn, glance, a brief adieu he bids.
The title really caught my attention... the verses caused me to smile. Thanks for this offering and your review of my work "No Bargain Buy" May your blessings overflow!
Judith
Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2013
You're a very romatic soul and your partner must be very blessed with such a loving man.
Divine artistry...gentle poem that paints adoration
in poetic words...flowing from a heart...that feels
things deeply and passionately.
Enjoyed wandering within your thoughts Budd.
Warm regards Isabella.
With such a calm and sincere sense of the ethereal, one can't help but feel drawn into what, for this reader, might become his own moment someday. Thank you for this.
All consuming love last night,
Dreaming of this one held tight.
Awakened to a sound of text,
Lips felt eyes and neck.
Dawn awakened sheet amiss,
Remembering hands,touch,and kiss.
Trinity knowing gift as one,
'Gout du chocolat, sent la rose, se souvenir de lui'
"plaisir"
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Lovely and sentimental poetry, Budd, I loved it.
Love and Dreams,
Karen
Judith
Gerrit
Lovely visions... very romantic to say the least...
Thoughtful you are to this muse or partner...
I really enjoyed this...
Love and Light
Lily
an honor to read!
Lady Vivian
A lovely write indeed!
With respect and smiles,
Carol Phelan Aebby
Love Everyday
Vickie
in poetic words...flowing from a heart...that feels
things deeply and passionately.
Enjoyed wandering within your thoughts Budd.
Warm regards Isabella.
Anna
Cheers,
Dan
Ron
Myrna
Always,
Deborah
Beautiful Budd,
Sandy
Dreaming of this one held tight.
Awakened to a sound of text,
Lips felt eyes and neck.
Dawn awakened sheet amiss,
Remembering hands,touch,and kiss.
Trinity knowing gift as one,
'Gout du chocolat, sent la rose, se souvenir de lui'
"plaisir"
Inspired by this one Budd...'Merveilleux'
TW
Love ya!
Jane
Ingeborg