Deafening silence and utter darkness
surrounds this place in this shrouded nightime. But to the one standing in native dress
it be where his soul is the most sublime. For here in this place hes without duress
in harmony with and at this place and time. Having been to where dark does light supress
whether it be vision, heart or ones mind. So here among nature without distress
he communes and feels among his own kind. More than any place, here the One does bless
allowing him to feel more than just fine.
I love it! Such a dark, mysterious, yet motivating piece. You're right, even in darkness, there is some light. Keep up the pen Sir.
Reviewed by DM Yates (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2013
Finding oneself and who one truly is. Beautifully written. I love the line 'it be where his soul is the most sublime.' To find that makes life well worth it, doesn't it?
I really enjoyed this poem, I have a son who is native, and very much into what he calls drifting and listening to the chirping birds and yet I hear the ravens going "CAW < CAW and he is in that peaceful place. When I used to live in the Steens mtns 103 miles to town and 29 miles to my nearest neighbor it never seemed dark at all.
A very peaceful place to be...
Something I also long for to be...
Thank you so much for this beautiful vision you have
penned here... I so love nature...
For here in this place hes without duress
in harmony with and at this place and time.
I have just come back from a journey, one that I thought would help me to forget. I can relate to what you have expressed through your verses, Budd. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,
Deafening silence,light without light, are powerfully paradoxical,but they are needed to describe such a rare quiet place of nature,and the reading of the work gives peace.
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
Continued success
Barbara J. Henry
I can most definitely relate to this piece, Budd. Just about every night, after midnight, I step out into the peaceful surroundings you describe here, my friend. Just to commune with nature and the blessings that surround us. Great write. God bless you and yours always.
Budd
A most deeply moving work of art you have written! It doesn't get any better than this!
I feel so peaceful after reading your poetry.
Peace love and light
Amber
Nature is the best gift from God.
Never alone when...Nature's around
...it's sounds and sights...felt
by all human senses...
Beautiful Poem! All the best Budd.
The subtleties in this poem Budd are like finding gemstones in beautiful black sand!
The freedom and harmony of soul felt, should be one of the Genie in a bottles wishes! They would not need anything else!
Floating on a cloud after reading this one!
Teresa
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
and know one is at peace
peace be with you
William
Gerrit
Something I also long for to be...
Thank you so much for this beautiful vision you have
penned here... I so love nature...
Love and Light
Lily
in harmony with and at this place and time.
I have just come back from a journey, one that I thought would help me to forget. I can relate to what you have expressed through your verses, Budd. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
Continued success
Barbara J. Henry
he communes and feels among his own kind.
Having just returned from a little nature get-a-way, I couldn't agree more.
[Budd]
peace & light
FAKHRE
*Budd*
so filled with uplifting emotions
Lady Vivian
& sweet surrender in quiet moment outdoors
it's just beautiful
Moonlight & Crickets
Vickie
Ingeborg
The native dress of his people place him in harmony with nature's surroundings. A spiritual expression of light and harmony.
Lady Mary Ann
Ron
A most deeply moving work of art you have written! It doesn't get any better than this!
I feel so peaceful after reading your poetry.
Peace love and light
Amber
Anna
Never alone when...Nature's around
...it's sounds and sights...felt
by all human senses...
Beautiful Poem! All the best Budd.
Chip Bergeron
Cheers,
Dan
brimming with rhyme
and finding your stride.
Well done.
Love ya!
Jane
The freedom and harmony of soul felt, should be one of the Genie in a bottles wishes! They would not need anything else!
Floating on a cloud after reading this one!
Teresa