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Eternity
by Janet Brice Parker → (All Poetry by Janet Brice Parker)
Sunday, February 3, 2019 Rated "G" by the Author.

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We're renting an old beach house for a month. It was born in the forties as was I. It's a shack of a place, patched up in places. Pealing paint, worn furniture and a rickety deck show it's age. But there is a sunroom that looks out upon white caps, bursting and reaching for the sky. I am broken and well worn. My insides are filled with cracked paint and ratty carpet. But the sunroom beckons and I am allowed a view of eternity.�

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Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on February 10, 2019

Nice poetic song. I can see and hear those waves crashing on the beach all day long. One water-bug am I.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on February 4, 2019

That last line summemed up the mystic of this place which "was born in the forties." Loved this poem, Janet.

Reviewed by Michael Schafer

Reviewed on February 4, 2019

Despite the infirmities of age, I loved the positive outlook within your lines.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on February 4, 2019

'But the sunroom beckons and I am allowed a view of eternity'----- BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 3, 2019

A wonderful mix of you and the place you have rented (for the winter?). Both have a wonderful patina and experience of age.

Ron

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 3, 2019

Be careful of molds when going into old places. They can make you sick. Nice view you have described.

Sandie

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