You can't win for losing, Jane, especially in writing poetry. No matter what you say, it is going to be interpreted according to the reader's head. I just take it as it comes. John
The line that caught George was "hiding half your face."
So your poem is sending a mixed message with both being laid-back and hiding at the same time. Just doesn't make sense. Especially the part about loving someone even if it's wrong.
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Michael D.
So your poem is sending a mixed message with both being laid-back and hiding at the same time. Just doesn't make sense. Especially the part about loving someone even if it's wrong.
Ron
There has not been violence in my life for around 24 years!! Thank you for caring, hon!
Love ya!
Jane