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Trapped
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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Again, I am fine, just an end of a long day (240 miles) rant...


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Trapped…


 


Have you ever felt you were trapped?


In a corner, in a cage, in a cell, or a box,


Scary feeling, no place to go,


Better to order in for some bagels and lox…


 


Felt this way have I of late,


Trapped with no money is always my fate,


Check didn’t clear, that I really hate,


How long must I go on feeling so irate…?


 


Started to be humor,


At least that was the rumor,


Turned into something totally different,


Something more related to the consumer,


Now I am not sure, I am totally indifferent…


 


No milk, no bread, little to eat,


Rufuz has his; I have more fat to live off of,


But he needs his meat,


Maybe in the ocean I need to go, with shoes made of concrete…J


              © ed ~ 10/1/04


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Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
I'm hearing your pain, bud! I wish I could share from our cupboard, but too far to ship across country. Prayers to you.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2004
It's time to stop this 'concrete shoes in the ocean' stuff!' Just stop it! Sigh... you want me to break out in hives? Now, then... the picture is hilarious! The poem, no doubt, strikes a familiar chord with everyone, from time to time. I should send you a loaf of my banana bread... that'll cheer you up! (NO... it is NOT similar to concrete!) (grin) katy xox.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
Don't we hate it if those checks does not clear....that happenend a few times with me this year...we almost lost out arm through that....my hubby worked his asssss off...ans when paytime came ...no money company went down the "tube"...then he changes jobes and the same thing happened...3 times...and think we are facing the same thing again soon...because the money is always due 3-4 days later than bargained for!!
Keep the faith my dear friend!!!

Hey you can come over for breaky now...guess it would be a midnight snack for you!!

Smile Okay....remember Rufuz loves his daddy!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
I'm starting to think you need to find a new line of work.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
Hey! don't talk that way Ed
I am sure Rufuz will share
Plus if you do anything crazy
he'll never forgive you,
he need you.....
now that rat in the gage
he has problems.
"I really hope this is only,
one of your great writes"

Stay Kool brother
William .....peace

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
Come on now, my friend...
:) As Edwin says what would Rufus do without you?
Keep holding on and never give up!

~Linda

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on October 1, 2004
Yeah?..What would Rufuz do without you then?...Ed you gotta ride it out...Sometimes it ain't easy...but in the end its really up to you...get mad, get motivated, do whatever it takes, so that you don't have to go throught this again. Hope to see you on the brighter side soon!

EDL


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