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Drinking to Excess...so why drink?
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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Drinking to Excess...so why drink?


 


Perhaps to get drunk,


Is that anyway to live your life?


Look at the picture above,


Who do you think could show them love?


 


Drinking and drugs do not mix, or so I have been told,


Never will you see, if this you do, your pension when you get old,


And one of these pictures may be shown to the world,


Afterwards you may not remember, but you know you must have swirled…


 


Yes this poet may smoke the weed,


Afterwards all he does do is his face feed,


Never will he drive therein, never will he speed,


Nor would he herein do anything that would mislead…


                © ed ~ 10/11/04


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Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2004
what a deterrant to drinking!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 12, 2004
LOL!!

Love the shape of that loooo!!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
Perhaps he's the reason it's legal to change one's name and travel freely to an entirely different location... permanently! Jaysus... he's a mess! (He looks familiar! LOL) katy xox.

Reviewed by Linda Roman
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
going a bit beyond....lol... nice work

Reviewed on October 11, 2004
(((ed)))

oh, man...that guy's toasted LOL i've been there...not broken the toilet seat, thank God, but paid homage to the porcelain god more times than i want to remember urrrrrrrrrrrrp THANK GOD, i've been sober 21 years...and have more fun being free of alcohol than i ever did...an excellent write with a powerful message--thank you, dear (((friend))), for the needed laugh and lesson

((((HUGS)))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
LOL!!..Is the guy in the pic really drunk..or just desperate enough to use the only available stall w/the broken shitter?

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
I left a few dear old toilet bowls that way in my time; and, alas, I really miss them, they were such a comfort.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on October 11, 2004
Great picture... lol. Nice write!


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