Sorry I deleted the wrong poem, and there were a few or so reviews, sorry to those that spared their time, I got a buzz and tried to do some deletions, oops...wrong move, LOL!
I know I commented before zenster, but I'll say hi anyway;-)Hi Rufuz;-)
Eileen
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2006
Knock Knock... who's there?
Ahem... er, is Eddie home? You've been branching out, I see. This is really cool, you... the brevity of the lines, the "ladder" effect with the words, even the spacing. IT's open, free AND free-spirited.
I'd say you're doing some great explorations inside your bean. This is (I repeat myself) very cool, Mr. M. katy xox
You are a lucky man, my friend - my dogs have also taught me many things - including sniffing those roses, and sometimes, even sniffing that manure - horse is the best!
excellent excellent piece, ed. reminded me of tanka poetry, which i love. not your usual stuff, not that i don't enjoy those, too.
the things we could learn from our dogs....
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
Interesting choice of title.....and the symbol with my active imagination became two guru's in a physical fight. One obviously got really hurt! Interesting thoughts.
This exceptional book, Celebrating the Gift of Being Alive, has the perfect thoughts and words for birthdays, graduations, engagements, marriages, and any life celebration or family tradition.
Note: Since my husband's cancer surgery 4/25/05, this book content has been integrated into the public speaking content for audiences interested in a sassy approach to personal and/or community awareness events. Another chapbook on intimate love poet
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Eileen
Ahem... er, is Eddie home? You've been branching out, I see. This is really cool, you... the brevity of the lines, the "ladder" effect with the words, even the spacing. IT's open, free AND free-spirited.
I'd say you're doing some great explorations inside your bean. This is (I repeat myself) very cool, Mr. M. katy xox
Take care,
Sherry
Love Tinka
the things we could learn from our dogs....