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Travelin'...
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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Another dream...


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Rufuz & I up in space,

Landed on an unknown planet,

Met some super nice people,

Hid the motorhome from their police,

Took it apart & gave it more space…

 

Played for them Jimi Hendrix,

Found the high guitar made them swoon,

This planet they lived on was hidden,

Somehow or other behind the moon,

But they called it the Loon…

 

With the rebuild, we started her up,

Then flew away did I and the pup,

Once out of the atmosphere,

We rocketed towards home,

Back just in time for the Loon,

Behind the moon to appear…

© ed ~ 11/12/08


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 Reviews of "Travelin'..."
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 17, 2008
Quite loony. They call the loon luney because at night, under the moon, its cries sound like a crazy laughing.

Ron

Reviewed on November 12, 2008
ED - another 'pipe' dream? or just whacko weed?

"Fly me to the Moon, and let me play upon the Stars,
let me see what Life is like, on LOONEY-TUNES or Mars..."

OH - YEAH - almost forgot - maybe you can CONVERT that 'coffin' sized shower stall into a larger, more spacious Telephone Booth - and like Dr. WHO - travel EVERYWHERE!

P.S. - down here, Loew's is CHEAPER than HOME DEPOT !!!

TK.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
so you're stealing my space making it your own, huh,i'll get more than a loon after you;-) good one Rufuz and pop!;-)

Eileen

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
Dog gone good little tail wagging story...

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed on November 12, 2008
Ahhh, dear Rufus had another adventure. What an imagination you have Ed. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
A grand dreamer you are just as I am sometimes too. Not sometimes, mostly all the time. I believe dreams do come true, you just have to believe in them. Life believing is receiving.

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
hmmmmm......... trippin or travelin' ?? lindalaw

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
Wowwwwww,sounds like a wild trip..hmmmmmm and you forgot to pick me up huh...LOL...enjoyed sweet man...Hugssssss....be well and always safe and always be you...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
Sounds like you were tripping not travellin man but what a ride. Well done.
fee

Reviewed on November 12, 2008
Ed,

Great imagination. Bonnie is right, only you. Or have you been smoking that funny weed again?

Mary


Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
I am with Bonnie here, but as my brother, I will fight for your right to be weird!

Ed the Elder


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
Now you've done it, Bro. I told those Loonites that the Ancient Eds would keep their hidden planet a secret - for all time.



You best sleep with one eye open for awhile; they usually visit Earth only during a Full Moon; but I think you've made them real Loonie now!

(Uh, Oh. I just realized that a Full Moon arrives tomorrow. Yikes!)

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
Only you Ed could come up with this hilarious dream, only you. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
Good work

Reviewed on November 12, 2008
What a trip that would be. :) Well done, Ed.

Now: if you get an RV, and go to Alaska: you have to stop in Texas first and pick up the twins (read: Karen and I). :D

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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